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2019年11月21日 18:40

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【是】【个】【可】【爱】【的】【男】【生】【,】【光】【长】【相】【就】【极】【富】【有】【喜】【剧】【性】【。】【他】【那】【红】【润】【的】【面】【庞】【总】【是】【透】【着】【红】【光】【,】【那】【双】【小】【眼】【睛】【里】【总】【是】【盛】【满】【了】【温】【柔】【与】【喜】【悦】【。】【可】【别】【被】【他】【的】【长】【相】【所】【迷】【惑】【,】【他】【经】【常】【捉】【弄】【班】【上】【的】【其】【他】【调】【皮】【鬼】【,】【干】【些】【无】【伤】【大】【雅】【的】【搞】【笑】【事】【。】【尽】【管】【这】【样】【,】【他】【仍】【然】【是】【我】【们】【班】【最】【受】【欢】【迎】【的】【同】【学】【之】【一】【。】【因】【为】【他】【的】【心】【态】【非】【常】【好】【,】【我】【们】【和】【他】【开】【玩】【笑】【,】【他】【从】【不】【生】【气】【,】【整】【天】【乐】【呵】【呵】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【天】【早】【晨】【,】【天】【刚】【蒙】【蒙】【亮】【,】【同】【桌】【还】【在】【寝】【室】【沉】【浸】【在】【他】【的】【美】【梦】【中】【。】【可】【在】【他】【浑】【然】【不】【知】【时】【,】【他】【的】【裤】【子】【早】【就】【被】【偷】【了】【!】【原】【来】【是】【我】【们】【班】【的】【调】【皮】【大】【王】【趁】【着】【他】【熟】【睡】【,】【顺】【手】【“】【牵】【走】【了】【”】【他】【的】【一】【条】【牛】【仔】【裤】【,】【并】【迅】【速】【逃】【到】【了】【寝】【室】【外】【,】【把】【他】【的】【牛】【仔】【裤】【用】【拖】【把】【挂】【在】【了】【围】【墙】【外】【面】【,】【正】【对】【女】【生】【宿】【舍】【。】【一】【阵】【微】【风】【吹】【来】【,】【同】【桌】【的】【裤】【子】【在】【风】【中】【摆】【动】【,】【好】【像】【燕】【子】【的】【尾】【巴】【。】【当】【我】【们】【从】【宿】【舍】【出】【来】【看】【到】【如】【此】【一】【幕】【时】【,】【笑】【得】【肚】【子】【都】【痛】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【对】【同】【桌】【来】【说】【,】【这】【只】【是】【“】【配】【菜】【”】【呢】【,】【还】【有】【“】【主】【食】【”】【哦】【!】【同】【桌】【被】【逼】【无】【奈】【只】【好】【穿】【上】【另】【一】【件】【牛】【仔】【裤】【,】【匆】【匆】【地】【赶】【到】【教】【室】【早】【读】【。】【刚】【踏】【进】【教】【室】【,】【还】【没】【来】【得】【及】【坐】【下】【他】【就】【开】【始】【给】【我】【讲】【他】【今】【早】【被】【整】【的】【事】【,】【虽】【然】【很】【“】【不】【幸】【”】【,】【但】【他】【满】【脸】【笑】【容】【,】【感】【觉】【开】【心】【。】【等】【他】【说】【得】【差】【不】【多】【刚】【想】【落】【座】【时】【,】【我】【们】【旁】【边】【的】【小】【胖】【猛】【地】【抽】【了】【他】【的】【凳】【子】【,】【他】【猝】【不】【及】【防】【,】【整】【个】【人】【重】【心】【不】【稳】【,】【直】【接】【屁】【股】【着】【地】【。】【看】【到】【他】【想】【笑】【笑】【不】【出】【、】【想】【发】【火】【又】【发】【不】【出】【来】【的】【表】【情】【,】【我】【整】【个】【人】【笑】【趴】【在】【课】【桌】【上】【了】【。】【他】【艰】【难】【地】【从】【地】【上】【爬】【起】【来】【,】【一】【摇】【一】【摆】【地】【走】【到】【座】【位】【上】【,】【双】【手】【不】【停】【地】【揉】【着】【摔】【疼】【的】【屁】【股】【,】【嘴】【里】【还】【带】【着】【R】【A】【P】【的】【节】【奏】【夸】【张】【地】【叫】【着】【:】【“】【哎】【哟】【,】【哎】【哟】【,】【哎】【哟】【哟】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【那】【可】【怜】【的】【同】【桌】【不】【知】【道】【,】【还】【有】【“】【加】【餐】【”】【在】【等】【着】【他】【呢】【。】【下】【午】【第】【一】【节】【课】【是】【体】【育】【,】【可】【这】【天】【气】【温】【陡】【然】【升】【高】【,】【大】【家】【穿】【着】【厚】【厚】【的】【长】【袖】【衬】【衫】【,】【个】【个】【汗】【流】【浃】【背】【,】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【更】【是】【大】【汗】【淋】【漓】【。】【马】【上】【又】【要】【去】【跑】【步】【,】【我】【们】【还】【不】【得】【给】【热】【死】【?】【我】【的】【同】【桌】【决】【定】【趁】【着】【大】【家】【都】【去】【室】【外】【整】【队】【时】【在】【教】【室】【里】【换】【一】【件】【短】【袖】【,】【他】【书】【包】【里】【正】【有】【一】【件】【呢】【!】【同】【学】【们】【全】【部】【出】【去】【了】【,】【他】【赶】【忙】【把】【衣】【服】【脱】【了】【,】【还】【没】【来】【得】【及】【穿】【上】【短】【袖】【,】【无】【巧】【不】【成】【书】【,】【因】【为】【老】【师】【出】【去】【做】【裁】【判】【了】【,】【班】【主】【任】【过】【来】【让】【大】【家】【都】【先】【回】【教】【室】【。】【女】【生】【们】【站】【在】【前】【排】【,】【先】【进】【教】【室】【,】【见】【我】【同】【桌】【上】【身】【光】【光】【正】【窘】【得】【不】【知】【何】【处】【躲】【藏】【,】【吓】【得】【尖】【叫】【,】【男】【生】【更】【是】【趁】【机】【起】【哄】【,】【教】【室】【里】【一】【片】【喧】【哗】【。】【班】【主】【任】【也】【进】【了】【教】【室】【,】【见】【此】【情】【景】【,】【开】【玩】【笑】【地】【问】【我】【那】【可】【爱】【的】【同】【桌】【:】【“】【就】【你】【那】【瘦】【不】【拉】【几】【的】【,】【可】【有】【点】【肌】【肉】【展】【示】【给】【大】【家】【瞧】【瞧】【?】【”】【一】【席】【话】【,】【引】【得】【大】【家】【笑】【得】【更】【厉】【害】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【很】【喜】【欢】【我】【这】【开】【朗】【的】【同】【桌】【,】【正】【是】【因】【为】【他】【的】【存】【在】【,】【我】【们】【的】【学】【校】【生】【活】【才】【有】【了】【更】【多】【的】【乐】【趣】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【作】【者】【以】【生】【动】【的】【描】【写】【、】【幽】【默】【的】【语】【言】【,】【形】【象】【再】【现】【了】【同】【桌】【的】【“】【悲】【惨】【生】【活】【”】【,】【让】【人】【读】【后】【不】【由】【捧】【腹】【大】【笑】【。】【正】【是】【因】【为】【有】【同】【桌】【这】【样】【同】【学】【的】【存】【在】【,】【大】【家】【的】【校】【园】【生】【活】【才】【有】【了】【更】【多】【的】【乐】【趣】【。】【末】【段】【揭】【示】【主】【旨】【,】【收】【束】【自】【然】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【圣】【美】【秀】【)】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【中】【考】【凝】【眸】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【千】【古】【文】【章】【意】【为】【本】【。】【考】【场】【作】【文】【更】【如】【此】【。】【意】【胜】【则】【文】【胜】【,】【意】【顺】【则】【文】【顺】【。】【“】【诗】【文】【美】【者】【,】【命】【意】【必】【善】【”】【,】【立】【意】【“】【善】【”】【文】【章】【才】【会】【“】【美】【”】【。】【立】【意】【不】【正】【确】【,】【文】【章】【的】【效】【果】【就】【不】【好】【;】【立】【意】【不】【深】【刻】【,】【文】【章】【的】【思】【想】【意】【义】【就】【不】【高】【,】【就】【没】【有】【多】【大】【的】【价】【值】【。】【“】【文】【贵】【乎】【自】【得】【”】【,】【“】【言】【前】【人】【所】【未】【言】【,】【发】【前】【人】【所】【未】【发】【”】【,】【让】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【的】【文】【章】【才】【能】【让】【人】【喜】【爱】【。】【文】【章】【最】【忌】【随】【人】【后】【,】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【,】【拾】【人】【牙】【慧】【是】【很】【让】【人】【厌】【烦】【的】【。】【因】【此】【,】【我】【们】【在】【写】【文】【章】【时】【必】【须】【要】【注】【意】【立】【意】【的】【新】【颖】【、】【深】【刻】【,】【这】【样】【才】【能】【打】【动】【人】【,】【给】【人】【以】【别】【开】【生】【面】【的】【新】【颖】【之】【感】【。】【有】【些】【同】【学】【文】【笔】【本】【不】【错】【,】【可】【是】【在】【写】【作】【时】【不】【注】【意】【立】【意】【,】【这】【就】【导】【致】【了】【作】【文】【格】【调】【不】【高】【,】【最】【终】【不】【能】【得】【高】【分】【,】【这】【是】【很】【可】【惜】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【感】【悟】【升】【格】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【下】【面】【一】【篇】【题】【为】【《】【礼】【物】【》】【的】【作】【文】【文】【笔】【本】【不】【错】【,】【可】【是】【在】【立】【意】【上】【却】【出】【了】【问】【题】【,】【这】【是】【很】【可】【惜】【的】【。】【《】【礼】【物】【》】【一】【文】【在】【叙】【述】【一】【对】【农】【村】【父】【女】【(】【女】【儿】【是】【“】【我】【”】【妈】【妈】【的】【学】【生】【)】【给】【“】【我】【”】【家】【送】【来】【一】【篮】【子】【鸡】【蛋】【,】【“】【我】【”】【妈】【妈】【当】【即】【拒】【绝】【了】【对】【方】【的】【礼】【物】【之】【后】【,】【写】【了】【这】【样】【一】【段】【话】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【,】【您】【毅】【然】【决】【然】【地】【拒】【绝】【了】【他】【们】【父】【女】【俩】【送】【来】【的】【鸡】【蛋】【,】【把】【歪】【风】【邪】【气】【挡】【在】【了】【门】【外】【,】【您】【真】【是】【一】【个】【洁】【身】【自】【好】【的】【好】【人】【,】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【您】【在】【我】【的】【眼】【里】【变】【得】【异】【常】【高】【大】【,】【您】【真】【是】【我】【的】【好】【妈】【妈】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【这】【段】【话】【来】【看】【,】【作】【者】【简】【单】【地】【将】【鸡】【蛋】【与】【其】【他】【礼】【物】【画】【上】【等】【号】【,】【没】【有】【认】【识】【到】【寄】【托】【在】【鸡】【蛋】【里】【面】【的】【是】【父】【女】【俩】【对】【老】【师】【的】【感】【激】【之】【情】【,】【‘】【结】【果】【错】【误】【地】【把】【农】【村】【父】【女】【送】【鸡】【蛋】【说】【成】【是】【“】【歪】【风】【邪】【气】【”】【。】【同】【时】【,】【对】【礼】【物】【一】【概】【拒】【绝】【,】【也】【是】【一】【种】【不】【加】【分】【析】【的】【绝】【对】【做】【法】【,】【不】【应】【该】【盲】【目】【赞】【扬】【。】【因】【此】【,】【修】【改】【这】【段】【话】【,】【应】【该】【准】【确】【把】【握】【父】【女】【俩】【的】【内】【心】【世】【界】【,】【辩】【证】【看】【待】【是】【否】【收】【礼】【的】【行】【为】【,】【从】【而】【实】【现】【立】【意】【的】【高】【远】【和】【新】【奇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【改】【后】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【知】【道】【,】【您】【并】【不】【是】【嫌】【弃】【这】【礼】【物】【不】【值】【钱】【、】【不】【珍】【贵】【。】【但】【是】【,】【您】【知】【道】【那】【里】【渗】【透】【了】【那】【父】【女】【俩】【对】【您】【的】【几】【多】【感】【激】【之】【情】【吗】【?】【您】【知】【道】【他】【们】【走】【了】【多】【远】【的】【路】【程】【才】【来】【到】【这】【个】【陌】【生】【的】【、】【冷】【漠】【的】【城】【市】【吗】【?】【您】【知】【道】【他】【们】【鼓】【起】【多】【大】【的】【勇】【气】【才】【敢】【举】【手】【敲】【击】【老】【师】【家】【的】【门】【吗】【?】【就】【是】【因】【为】【您】【的】【拒】【绝】【。】【他】【们】【心】【里】【会】【蒙】【上】【一】【层】【被】【人】【瞧】【不】【起】【的】【阴】【影】【,】【他】【们】【又】【该】【灰】【溜】【溜】【地】【将】【鸡】【蛋】【如】【数】【拿】【回】【去】【。】【他】【们】【的】【自】【尊】【,】【受】【到】【了】【多】【大】【的】【打】【击】【啊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【,】【这】【不】【是】【用】【来】【行】【贿】【的】【礼】【物】【,】【这】【只】【是】【老】【百】【姓】【最】【朴】【实】【的】【真】【情】【表】【达】【。】【您】【为】【什】【么】【就】【不】【能】【高】【兴】【地】【收】【下】【来】【,】【然】【后】【回】【赠】【一】【些】【礼】【物】【给】【他】【们】【呢】【?】【—】【—】【接】【受】【真】【情】【,】【体】【恤】【他】【人】【,】【原】【本】【也】【是】【一】【种】【修】【养】【啊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【修】【改】【之】【后】【的】【文】【章】【,】【抓】【住】【父】【女】【俩】【送】【鸡】【蛋】【的】【本】【来】【意】【义】【,】【提】【出】【了】【合】【情】【合】【理】【的】【新】【建】【议】【,】【给】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【存】【在】【问】【题】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【多】【次】【参】【加】【中】【考】【作】【文】【的】【阅】【卷】【工】【作】【,】【发】【现】【一】【些】【考】【生】【在】【立】【意】【上】【经】【常】【存】【在】【如】【下】【问】【题】【,】【很】【值】【得】【我】【们】【深】【思】【与】【借】【鉴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【具】【体】【说】【来】【,】【主】【要】【表】【现】【在】【如】【下】【几】【个】【方】【面】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【是】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【显】【陈】【旧】【。】【平】【时】【人】【家】【怎】【么】【说】【,】【他】【就】【怎】【么】【说】【;】【过】【去】【这】【么】【说】【,】【现】【在】【还】【是】【这】【么】【说】【;】【题】【目】【中】【的】【导】【语】【有】【个】【什】【么】【观】【点】【,】【他】【绝】【对】【不】【敢】【提】【出】【异】【议】【来】【的】【。】【这】【样】【的】【作】【文】【,】【可】【以】【说】【是】【老】【生】【常】【谈】【,】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【,】【了】【无】【新】【意】【。】【比】【如】【,】【以】【“】【沟】【通】【”】【为】【话】【题】【写】【作】【,】【很】【多】【同】【学】【不】【约】【而】【同】【地】【以】【“】【我】【们】【要】【和】【父】【母】【多】【多】【沟】【通】【”】【为】【中】【心】【,】【选】【取】【一】【两】【个】【故】【事】【来】【表】【达】【。】【这】【些】【文】【章】【,】【立】【意】【一】【般】【,】【得】【分】【都】【较】【低】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【是】【浅】【尝】【辄】【止】【显】【肤】【浅】【。】【不】【能】【由】【表】【及】【里】【、】【由】【浅】【入】【深】【、】【由】【果】【推】【因】【、】【由】【形】【观】【神】【地】【审】【察】【事】【物】【,】【不】【能】【透】【过】【现】【象】【深】【入】【本】【质】【,】【透】【过】【表】【象】【看】【到】【真】【相】【,】【经】【由】【问】【题】【揭】【示】【原】【因】【,】【经】【由】【形】【式】【洞】【察】【内】【涵】【。】【这】【样】【一】【来】【,】【看】【问】【题】【就】【只】【能】【停】【留】【在】【表】【面】【了】【。】【具】【体】【地】【说】【,】【他】【们】【的】【文】【章】【只】【能】【回】【答】【“】【是】【什】【么】【”】【“】【有】【什】【么】【”】【这】【一】【类】【的】【问】【题】【,】【而】【不】【能】【涉】【及】【“】【为】【什】【么】【”】【“】【怎】【么】【办】【”】【一】【类】【较】【深】【入】【的】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【是】【剑】【走】【偏】【锋】【显】【消】【极】【。】【不】【遵】【从】【社】【会】【公】【认】【、】【真】【善】【美】【的】【标】【准】【,】【不】【遵】【从】【国】【家】【的】【法】【律】【法】【规】【精】【神】【,】【只】【想】【着】【一】【鸣】【惊】【人】【,】【提】【出】【危】【言】【耸】【听】【的】【观】【点】【。】【比】【如】【,】【有】【人】【讲】【诚】【信】【吃】【大】【亏】【,】【还】【是】【虚】【伪】【一】【些】【、】【实】【际】【一】【些】【好】【;】【有】【人】【认】【为】【牺】【牲】【自】【己】【去】【救】【人】【是】【犯】【傻】【,】【不】【如】【明】【哲】【保】【身】【;】【有】【人】【提】【出】【应】【该】【尊】【重】【个】【人】【自】【由】【,】【允】【许】【中】【学】【生】【谈】【恋】【爱】【,】【等】【等】【。】【这】【种】【思】【想】【认】【识】【上】【的】【偏】【差】【如】【果】【出】【现】【在】【考】【场】【作】【文】【上】【,】【即】【使】【文】【章】【结】【构】【完】【整】【、】【语】【言】【生】【动】【,】【也】【不】【会】【得】【到】【高】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【是】【贪】【多】【求】【全】【显】【盲】【目】【。】【不】【集】【中】【在】【某】【一】【个】【主】【题】【上】【,】【中】【途】【转】【向】【另】【一】【个】【主】【题】【,】【从】【而】【使】【得】【已】【确】【立】【的】【中】【心】【不】【能】【贯】【穿】【始】【终】【,】【读】【者】【也】【理】【不】【出】【头】【绪】【。】【结】【果】【让】【人】【读】【后】【如】【在】【云】【里】【雾】【里】【,】【不】【知】【所】【云】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【满】【分】【例】【析】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【感】【谢】【苦】【难】【 】【湖】【南】【益】【阳】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【秋】【天】【的】【果】【实】【感】【谢】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【,】【才】【有】【了】【成】【熟】【的】【筋】【骨】【;】【感】【谢】【光】【照】【日】【晒】【,】【才】【有】【了】【成】【熟】【的】【俊】【秀】【。】【是】【的】【,】【没】【有】【风】【雨】【光】【热】【,】【它】【不】【可】【能】【走】【向】【丰】【硕】【、】【走】【向】【成】【熟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【是】【痛】【苦】【的】【,】【人】【们】【都】【尽】【可】【能】【逃】【避】【它】【。】【平】【坦】【、】【安】【逸】【是】【许】【多】【人】【所】【渴】【望】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亚】【里】【士】【多】【德】【说】【:】【“】【没】【有】【经】【过】【灾】【难】【的】【是】【一】【堆】【垃】【圾】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【,】【人】【们】【不】【懂】【得】【什】【么】【是】【坚】【强】【。】【一】【张】【从】【未】【出】【过】【海】【的】【风】【帆】【,】【一】【旦】【在】【海】【上】【遇】【到】【风】【暴】【,】【就】【注】【定】【不】【能】【控】【制】【方】【向】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【,】【人】【们】【就】【不】【懂】【得】【什】【么】【是】【忍】【受】【。】【只】【有】【懂】【得】【忍】【受】【的】【人】【才】【能】【最】【终】【创】【出】【自】【己】【的】【一】【片】【天】【地】【,】【而】【不】【懂】【得】【忍】【受】【的】【人】【很】【容】【易】【在】【困】【难】【面】【前】【放】【弃】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【,】【人】【们】【就】【不】【懂】【得】【进】【步】【。】【苦】【难】【是】【台】【阶】【,】【正】【是】【这】【一】【个】【个】【苦】【难】【的】【台】【阶】【,】【才】【可】【能】【助】【你】【登】【上】【成】【功】【的】【高】【台】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【,】【人】【们】【就】【是】【一】【潭】【死】【水】【,】【静】【止】【而】【没】【有】【前】【进】【的】【动】【力】【。】【瀑】【流】【正】【是】【经】【历】【沙】【砾】【阻】【石】【,】【忍】【受】【痛】【苦】【,】【用】【自】【己】【流】【动】【的】【身】【躯】【与】【之】【搏】【斗】【,】【最】【终】【到】【达】【峭】【崖】【,】【纵】【身】【一】【跃】【,】【一】【泻】【而】【下】【,】【气】【势】【磅】【礴】【。】【蝴】【蝶】【能】【够】【冲】【破】【茧】【的】【束】【缚】【,】【翩】【然】【起】【舞】【于】【花】【丛】【中】【,】【正】【是】【因】【为】【在】【努】【力】【挣】【脱】【茧】【的】【过】【程】【中】【,】【使】【自】【己】【的】【翅】【膀】【充】【了】【血】【,】【从】【而】【变】【得】【强】【健】【有】【力】【。】【而】【历】【史】【许】【多】【为】【人】【称】【颂】【的】【人】【,】【也】【是】【因】【为】【他】【们】【能】【经】【历】【一】【番】【艰】【辛】【,】【最】【终】【实】【现】【自】【己】【的】【理】【想】【。】【李】【时】【珍】【不】【经】【历】【千】【辛】【万】【苦】【,】【跋】【山】【涉】【水】【,】【怎】【能】【写】【出】【《】【本】【草】【纲】【目】【》】【;】【爱】【迪】【生】【不】【尝】【试】【世】【间】【千】【万】【种】【金】【属】【材】【料】【,】【怎】【能】【发】【现】【最】【适】【合】【做】【灯】【丝】【的】【钨】【;】【红】【军】【不】【经】【历】【二】【万】【五】【千】【里】【长】【征】【,】【不】【经】【历】【艰】【苦】【岁】【月】【的】【磨】【炼】【,】【怎】【能】【成】【为】【中】【华】【民】【族】【解】【放】【的】【功】【臣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【应】【感】【谢】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【,】【就】【像】【果】【实】【感】【谢】【风】【霜】【雨】【雪】【一】【样】【。】【怀】【着】【勇】【敢】【的】【心】【去】【迎】【接】【苦】【难】【的】【洗】【礼】【,】【怀】【着】【感】【恩】【的】【心】【去】【接】【受】【上】【帝】【赐】【予】【人】【类】【最】【宝】【贵】【的】【礼】【物】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【极】【有】【特】【色】【的】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【。】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【透】【过】【材】【料】【准】【确】【地】【把】【握】【了】【隐】【藏】【其】【中】【的】【核】【心】【意】【蕴】【:】【苦】【难】【、】【磨】【炼】【对】【成】【长】【的】【意】【义】【。】【紧】【扣】【着】【这】【一】【意】【旨】【,】【小】【作】【者】【开】【头】【从】【正】【反】【两】【方】【面】【阐】【述】【。】【发】【掘】【了】【苦】【难】【对】【成】【熟】【、】【成】【才】【的】【意】【义】【。】【文】【章】【主】【体】【部】【分】【每】【段】【反】【入】【正】【立】【,】【依】【次】【检】【阅】【苦】【难】【对】【人】【的】【坚】【强】【、】【韧】【性】【、】【进】【步】【、】【动】【力】【诸】【方】【面】【的】【作】【用】【,】【从】【个】【人】【到】【团】【体】【,】【从】【成】【才】【到】【立】【国】【,】【视】【野】【开】【阔】【,】【立】【意】【深】【刻】【,】【说】【理】【透】【辟】【,】【因】【而】【结】【尾】【总】【结】【的】【“】【感】【谢】【”】【就】【特】【别】【富】【于】【激】【励】【性】【。】【这】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【启】【示】【我】【们】【,】【要】【写】【好】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【首】【先】【要】【吃】【透】【题】【旨】【,】【确】【立】【主】【题】【要】【单】【一】【集】【中】【,】【立】【意】【观】【点】【要】【正】【确】【、】【高】【远】【,】【从】【多】【个】【角】【度】【充】【分】【发】【掘】【立】【意】【的】【思】【想】【,】【这】【样】【才】【能】【使】【文】【章】【主】【题】【突】【出】【,】【格】【调】【高】【迈】【,】【超】【出】【同】【类】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【技】【法】【总】【结】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【通】【过】【上】【面】【对】【中】【学】【生】【作】【文】【立】【意】【存】【在】【问】【题】【的】【分】【析】【及】【例】【文】【剖】【析】【,】【我】【们】【可】【以】【总】【结】【出】【中】【考】【作】【文】【要】【想】【以】【“】【意】【”】【取】【胜】【,】【必】【须】【做】【到】【如】【下】【四】【点】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【是】【准】【。】【所】【谓】【准】【,】【就】【是】【立】【意】【要】【符】【合】【客】【观】【事】【物】【的】【本】【质】【和】【规】【律】【,】【表】【达】【出】【来】【的】【思】【想】【观】【点】【和】【感】【情】【要】【健】【康】【、】【积】【极】【向】【上】【。】【立】【意】【准】【确】【是】【写】【好】【作】【文】【的】【基】【本】【要】【求】【,】【也】【是】【评】【价】【文】【章】【的】【重】【要】【标】【准】【。】【一】【般】【来】【说】【,】【我】【们】【的】【立】【意】【要】【与】【我】【们】【目】【前】【国】【家】【倡】【导】【的】【公】【德】【相】【一】【致】【,】【要】【与】【当】【前】【的】【时】【代】【精】【神】【相】【一】【致】【。】【如】【:】【歌】【颂】【真】【、】【善】【、】【美】【,】【抨】【击】【假】【、】【丑】【、】【恶】【,】【提】【倡】【以】【人】【为】【本】【、】【爱】【国】【、】【诚】【信】【、】【环】【境】【保】【护】【、】【无】【私】【奉】【献】【等】【等】【。】【决】【不】【能】【表】【现】【厌】【世】【消】【极】【的】【思】【想】【,】【或】【者】【是】【为】【那】【些】【腐】【败】【分】【子】【、】【迷】【信】【分】【子】【歌】【功】【颂】【德】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【是】【明】【。】【议】【论】【文】【观】【点】【不】【清】【,】【似】【是】【而】【非】【,】【模】【棱】【两】【可】【;】【记】【叙】【文】【主】【题】【不】【明】【,】【含】【含】【糊】【糊】【,】【形】【散】【神】【散】【,】【“】【几】【只】【黄】【鹂】【鸣】【翠】【柳】【”】【,】【这】【都】【是】【作】【文】【的】【大】【忌】【。】【这】【个】【问】【题】【的】【出】【现】【自】【然】【与】【作】【者】【的】【认】【识】【水】【平】【有】【关】【,】【但】【也】【与】【“】【意】【在】【笔】【后】【…】【‘】【下】【笔】【匆】【匆】【”】【有】【关】【,】【所】【以】【写】【前】【要】【先】【想】【好】【自】【己】【的】【写】【作】【目】【的】【,】【写】【时】【要】【将】【观】【点】【、】【主】【题】【尽】【量】【用】【一】【句】【话】【具】【体】【明】【确】【地】【体】【现】【出】【来】【,】【不】【要】【让】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【去】【“】【提】【炼】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【是】【新】【。】【如】【何】【“】【新】【”】【呢】【?】【就】【是】【要】【选】【好】【切】【入】【点】【,】【力】【争】【“】【道】【他】【人】【之】【所】【未】【道】【”】【,】【写】【出】【别】【人】【没】【有】【写】【出】【来】【的】【东】【西】【。】【很】【多】【事】【情】【都】【是】【“】【横】【看】【成】【岭】【侧】【成】【峰】【,】【远】【近】【高】【低】【各】【不】【同】【”】【的】【,】【因】【为】【社】【会】【是】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【的】【,】【答】【案】【是】【多】【种】【多】【样】【的】【。】【同】【样】【的】【事】【情】【,】【从】【不】【同】【角】【度】【去】【审】【视】【,】【就】【能】【有】【新】【感】【受】【。】【比】【如】【“】【郑】【人】【买】【履】【”】【的】【故】【事】【,】【千】【百】【年】【来】【一】【直】【被】【用】【来】【讽】【刺】【一】【些】【教】【条】【主】【义】【者】【,】【但】【有】【个】【同】【学】【在】【做】【《】【怎】【样】【正】【确】【看】【待】【分】【数】【》】【的】【文】【章】【里】【从】【这】【一】【古】【老】【的】【故】【事】【中】【却】【“】【榨】【”】【出】【了】【新】【“】【汁】【”】【来】【一】【将】【那】【个】【郑】【国】【人】【说】【成】【是】【“】【高】【分】【低】【能】【”】【。】【这】【确】【实】【很】【“】【新】【鲜】【”】【,】【但】【这】【一】【观】【点】【是】【经】【过】【合】【理】【的】【推】【理】【而】【来】【的】【:】【郑】【国】【人】【对】【买】【履】【要】【带】【脚】【的】【尺】【码】【这】【一】【生】【活】【知】【识】【记】【得】【非】【常】【牢】【固】【,】【但】【来】【到】【市】【场】【上】【而】【把】【尺】【码】【忘】【在】【家】【里】【时】【,】【却】【不】【知】【“】【活】【用】【”】【知】【识】【用】【脚】【试】【…】【…】【这】【样】【的】【观】【点】【哪】【能】【不】【让】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【是】【深】【。】【就】【是】【写】【出】【别】【人】【写】【不】【出】【来】【的】【东】【西】【。】【欧】【阳】【修】【在】【作】【文】【上】【主】【张】【“】【辞】【必】【己】【出】【”】【,】【他】【自】【己】【在】【写】【作】【中】【也】【是】【力】【争】【做】【到】【这】【一】【点】【的】【。】【欧】【阳】【修】【煞】【费】【苦】【心】【写】【完】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【之】【后】【常】【拿】【给】【朋】【友】【看】【一】【看】【,】【当】【文】【章】【得】【到】【朋】【友】【的】【赞】【赏】【时】【,】【他】【却】【常】【常】【忧】【心】【忡】【忡】【,】【认】【为】【自】【己】【的】【文】【章】【观】【点】【还】【没】【有】【超】【过】【别】【人】【,】【仍】【然】【停】【滞】【在】【一】【般】【人】【的】【认】【识】【水】【平】【上】【;】【而】【当】【朋】【友】【们】【都】【摇】【头】【叹】【息】【时】【,】【他】【却】【沾】【沾】【自】【喜】【,】【心】【满】【意】【足】【,】【认】【为】【这】【才】【是】【一】【篇】【真】【正】【的】【好】【文】【章】【。】【欧】【阳】【修】【的】【做】【法】【似】【乎】【“】【过】【分】【”】【了】【一】【点】【儿】【,】【但】【他】【追】【求】【的】【目】【标】【没】【有】【错】【,】【倘】【若】【自】【己】【的】【文】【章】【仍】【然】【停】【留】【在】【别】【人】【的】【认】【识】【水】【平】【之】【下】【,】【那】【么】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【还】【有】【什】【么】【存】【在】【的】【价】【值】【呢】【?】【王】【蒙】【说】【:】【“】【作】【家】【要】【有】【真】【知】【灼】【见】【”】【。】【对】【于】【中】【学】【生】【来】【讲】【,】【作】【文】【中】【电】【应】【该】【力】【求】【“】【真】【知】【灼】【见】【”】【,】【有】【“】【真】【知】【灼】【见】【”】【的】【文】【章】【才】【有】【成】【为】【上】【乘】【之】【作】【的】【可】【能】【。】【需】【要】【提】【醒】【的】【是】【,】【不】【要】【为】【了】【追】【求】【“】【新】【”】【“】【深】【”】【而】【误】【入】【歧】【途】【,】【“】【新】【”】【“】【深】【”】【不】【是】【片】【面】【偏】【激】【,】【不】【是】【大】【放】【厥】【词】【,】【不】【是】【歪】【理】【邪】【说】【。】【思】【想】【健】【康】【、】【观】【点】【正】【确】【的】【作】【文】【,】【才】【能】【在】【中】【考】【中】【取】【得】【高】【分】【。】小学生心理健康教育【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【男】【孩】【,】【你】【使】【我】【从】【迷】【乱】【走】【向】【清】【醒】【,】【我】【想】【握】【住】【你】【的】【手】【,】【道】【一】【声】【谢】【谢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【男】【孩】【是】【转】【学】【到】【我】【们】【班】【来】【的】【,】【很】【快】【,】【他】【就】【以】【狂】【野】【而】【早】【熟】【的】【性】【格】【和】【超】【群】【的】【学】【习】【成】【绩】【引】【起】【我】【的】【注】【意】【。】【作】【为】【班】【长】【,】【看】【到】【成】【绩】【总】【列】【全】【班】【第】【一】【的】【我】【有】【了】【对】【手】【,】【反】【倒】【觉】【得】【是】【件】【好】【事】【。】【男】【孩】【,】【我】【想】【握】【住】【你】【的】【手】【,】【说】【一】【声】【,】【让】【我】【们】【成】【为】【友】【好】【的】【竞】【争】【伙】【伴】【吧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【是】【,】【才】【几】【个】【回】【合】【,】【我】【便】【败】【下】【阵】【来】【,】【对】【于】【他】【的】【实】【力】【,】【我】【不】【得】【不】【甘】【拜】【下】【风】【。】【时】【间】【稍】【长】【,】【我】【便】【发】【现】【自】【己】【的】【内】【心】【有】【了】【微】【妙】【的】【变】【化】【:】【和】【他】【擦】【肩】【而】【过】【,】【我】【会】【脸】【红】【;】【和】【他】【讨】【论】【问】【题】【,】【我】【会】【语】【无】【伦】【次】【;】【老】【师】【批】【评】【他】【,】【我】【会】【难】【受】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【告】【诫】【自】【己】【,】【振】【作】【起】【来】【,】【全】【力】【追】【赶】【,】【重】【新】【夺】【回】【第】【一】【的】【宝】【座】【,】【但】【是】【青】【春】【的】【心】【灵】【悸】【动】【是】【无】【法】【掌】【控】【的】【,】【连】【看】【书】【时】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【都】【会】【掠】【过】【他】【的】【身】【影】【。】【慢】【慢】【地】【,】【他】【那】【投】【篮】【的】【姿】【势】【、】【沉】【思】【的】【表】【情】【、】【幽】【默】【的】【话】【语】【和】【爽】【朗】【的】【笑】【声】【成】【为】【我】【每】【天】【都】【要】【反】【复】【回】【味】【的】【东】【西】【。】【男】【孩】【,】【我】【真】【想】【握】【住】【你】【的】【手】【,】【说】【一】【声】【“】【我】【是】【真】【的】【喜】【欢】【你】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【终】【于】【,】【有】【一】【天】【我】【鼓】【起】【勇】【气】【约】【他】【去】【学】【校】【对】【面】【的】【公】【园】【散】【步】【。】【不】【料】【他】【爽】【快】【答】【应】【,】【这】【反】【倒】【使】【我】【生】【了】【一】【丝】【不】【安】【。】【一】【路】【上】【,】【他】【兴】【致】【勃】【勃】【地】【讲】【着】【刚】【举】【行】【过】【的】【数】【学】【考】【试】【的】【事】【,】【而】【我】【只】【是】【随】【声】【附】【和】【。】【到】【后】【来】【,】【他】【的】【话】【也】【少】【了】【,】【我】【暗】【想】【:】【这】【样】【可】【不】【行】【。】【再】【过】【十】【秒】【,】【是】【的】【,】【再】【过】【十】【秒】【,】【我】【一】【定】【要】【对】【他】【说】【一】【句】【“】【我】【很】【喜】【欢】【你】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【一】【秒】【,】【我】【松】【开】【了】【紧】【握】【的】【拳】【头】【;】【第】【二】【秒】【,】【我】【竟】【然】【听】【到】【自】【己】【的】【心】【跳】【;】【第】【三】【秒】【,】【听】【到】【风】【吹】【树】【叶】【,】【那】【沙】【沙】【声】【宛】【如】【我】【烦】【乱】【不】【堪】【的】【心】【绪】【;】【第】【四】【秒】【,】【我】【偷】【窥】【了】【他】【一】【眼】【—】【—】【紧】【锁】【双】【眉】【,】【难】【道】【和】【我】【一】【样】【紧】【张】【吗】【?】【第】【五】【秒】【,】【是】【不】【是】【不】【要】【讲】【了】【?】【第】【六】【秒】【,】【让】【我】【再】【过】【十】【秒】【吧】【;】【第】【七】【秒】【,】【不】【行】【,】【一】【定】【得】【说】【;】【第】【八】【秒】【,】【我】【的】【心】【提】【到】【嗓】【子】【眼】【了】【;】【第】【九】【秒】【,】【我】【用】【力】【擦】【了】【一】【下】【衣】【角】【,】【仿】【佛】【要】【擦】【去】【所】【有】【的】【不】【安】【;】【第】【十】【秒】【,】【我】【已】【经】【准】【备】【好】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【说】【,】【你】【能】【不】【能】【不】【要】【再】【难】【受】【了】【。】【这】【次】【数】【学】【考】【试】【虽】【然】【重】【要】【,】【但】【偶】【尔】【的】【失】【误】【和】【成】【绩】【的】【暂】【时】【下】【降】【都】【属】【正】【常】【,】【你】【还】【是】【要】【相】【信】【自】【己】【的】【实】【力】【,】【老】【师】【和】【同】【学】【也】【都】【对】【你】【抱】【有】【很】【高】【的】【期】【待】【,】【切】【记】【自】【己】【的】【目】【标】【啊】【!】【”】【他】【忽】【然】【语】【调】【铿】【锵】【地】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刚】【才】【还】【魂】【不】【守】【舍】【的】【我】【,】【一】【下】【子】【愣】【住】【了】【,】【吃】【惊】【地】【看】【着】【他】【,】【一】【句】【话】【也】【说】【不】【出】【来】【。】【原】【来】【,】【他】【一】【直】【关】【心】【着】【我】【的】【成】【绩】【,】【原】【来】【他】【以】【为】【我】【今】【天】【的】【情】【绪】【反】【常】【是】【由】【于】【成】【绩】【的】【下】【降】【…】【…】【我】【一】【下】【清】【醒】【了】【,】【觉】【得】【自】【己】【好】【渺】【小】【,】【好】【可】【笑】【,】【在】【自】【己】【的】【远】【大】【目】【标】【面】【前】【,】【我】【的】【自】【作】【多】【情】【又】【有】【什】【么】【意】【义】【?】【我】【一】【下】【子】【清】【醒】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【男】【孩】【,】【你】【以】【一】【席】【良】【言】【让】【我】【猛】【醒】【,】【让】【我】【变】【得】【理】【智】【起】【来】【。】【我】【想】【握】【住】【你】【的】【手】【,】【真】【诚】【地】【道】【一】【声】【谢】【谢】【。】【我】【想】【,】【凭】【你】【的】【聪】【明】【,】【也】【许】【你】【早】【就】【察】【觉】【到】【了】【我】【对】【你】【的】【那】【份】【感】【情】【,】【但】【你】【却】【有】【意】【误】【读】【,】【你】【简】【直】【是】【一】【个】【善】【于】【处】【理】【棘】【手】【问】【题】【的】【高】【手】【;】【如】【果】【你】【真】【的】【没】【有】【看】【出】【我】【的】【心】【思】【,】【那】【你】【可】【以】【说】【是】【一】【个】【专】【心】【读】【书】【而】【心】【无】【旁】【骛】【的】【可】【爱】【的】【书】【呆】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【管】【怎】【么】【样】【,】【都】【要】【谢】【谢】【你】【。】【我】【想】【握】【住】【你】【的】【手】【,】【道】【一】【声】【珍】【重】【,】【祝】【你】【前】【程】【似】【锦】【,】【人】【生】【美】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【 】【:】【 】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【内】【容】【是】【有】【点】【出】【格】【的】【,】【她】【大】【胆】【地】【写】【了】【自】【己】【的】【一】【段】【恋】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【是】【,】【凡】【是】【读】【过】【的】【人】【都】【感】【到】【真】【实】【而】【美】【好】【。】【一】【位】【老】【师】【甚】【至】【坦】【率】【地】【承】【认】【,】【此】【文】【使】【她】【回】【想】【起】【自】【己】【学】【生】【时】【代】【也】【曾】【有】【过】【的】【那】【种】【心】【悸】【、】【冲】【动】【。】【我】【则】【赞】【赏】【朱】【亚】【娟】【这】【个】【女】【孩】【的】【勇】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【青】【少】【年】【的】【内】【心】【深】【处】【开】【始】【拥】【有】【了】【自】【己】【的】【秘】【密】【,】【他】【们】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【深】【藏】【着】【。】【其】【实】【,】【坦】【诚】【地】【将】【它】【们】【写】【下】【来】【,】【反】【而】【能】【拉】【近】【与】【读】【者】【的】【心】【理】【距】【离】【。】【因】【为】【你】【的】【想】【法】【,】【别】【人】【未】【必】【没】【有】【,】【只】【是】【不】【好】【意】【思】【讲】【罢】【了】【。】【须】【知】【,】【作】【文】【不】【是】【宣】【传】【品】【,】【它】【应】【具】【有】【一】【定】【的】【私】【密】【性】【,】【而】【隐】【秘】【的】【东】【西】【往】【往】【是】【最】【真】【实】【、】【最】【深】【刻】【、】【最】【能】【反】【映】【人】【性】【的】【。】【越】【是】【私】【人】【的】【东】【西】【,】【写】【下】【来】【就】【越】【有】【可】【读】【性】【,】【就】【越】【能】【进】【入】【他】【人】【的】【心】【灵】【,】【如】【果】【在】【写】【作】【时】【把】【内】【心】【的】【种】【种】【隐】【秘】【弃】【之】【不】【用】【而】【去】【追】【逐】【人】【人】【皆】【有】【的】【东】【西】【,】【文】【章】【定】【然】【是】【写】【不】【好】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【早】【恋】【会】【影】【响】【学】【习】【,】【但】【此】【文】【又】【真】【实】【地】【告】【诉】【我】【们】【,】【青】【少】【年】【是】【懂】【得】【用】【理】【智】【来】【处】【理】【情】【感】【的】【,】【存】【在】【于】【他】【们】【心】【中】【朦】【胧】【的】【爱】【意】【并】【非】【人】【们】【想】【象】【的】【那】【么】【可】【怕】【,】【正】【如】【此】【文】【所】【说】【,】【“】【青】【春】【的】【心】【灵】【悸】【动】【是】【无】【法】【掌】【控】【的】【”】【,】【爱】【恋】【之】【情】【的】【滋】【长】【是】【纯】【真】【美】【好】【的】【人】【性】【的】【自】【然】【流】【露】【。】【严】【格】【地】【说】【,】【在】【文】【中】【,】【女】【孩】【只】【是】【单】【向】【的】【爱】【慕】【和】【缠】【绵】【的】【暗】【恋】【而】【已】【,】【她】【想】【做】【的】【仅】【仅】【是】【握】【住】【对】【方】【的】【手】【,】【说】【一】【声】【喜】【欢】【他】【而】【已】【,】【而】【男】【孩】【理】【智】【的】【坚】【守】【、】【聪】【明】【的】【婉】【拒】【则】【使】【女】【孩】【猛】【醒】【,】【快】【要】【决】【堤】【的】【情】【感】【潮】【水】【顷】【刻】【消】【退】【,】【一】【切】【都】【回】【到】【了】【生】【活】【的】【常】【规】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【作】【应】【植】【根】【内】【心】【,】【让】【心】【灵】【与】【读】【者】【面】【对】【面】【,】【文】【章】【才】【能】【真】【正】【起】【到】【交】【流】【的】【作】【用】【。】【有】【些】【作】【家】【就】【敢】【于】【揭】【示】【自】【己】【内】【心】【鲜】【为】【人】【知】【一】【面】【。】【周】【作】【人】【写】【过】【一】【篇】【《】【初】【恋】【》】【,】【少】【年】【的】【他】【曾】【暗】【恋】【过】【邻】【家】【女】【孩】【三】【姑】【娘】【,】【后】【来】【她】【患】【霍】【乱】【死】【了】【,】【当】【得】【知】【这】【一】【消】【息】【时】【,】【他】【是】【这】【样】【写】【的】【:】【“】【…】【…】【同】【时】【又】【似】【乎】【很】【是】【安】【静】【,】【仿】【佛】【心】【里】【一】【块】【大】【石】【头】【已】【经】【放】【下】【了】【。】【”】【这】【就】【是】【内】【心】【隐】【秘】【的】【一】【面】【。】【一】【个】【自】【己】【爱】【恋】【过】【的】【人】【死】【了】【,】【应】【该】【沉】【浸】【在】【悲】【痛】【之】【中】【,】【怎】【么】【会】【感】【到】【一】【阵】【轻】【松】【呢】【?】【这】【不】【是】【太】【自】【私】【了】【吗】【?】【可】【是】【想】【想】【也】【是】【,】【从】【此】【可】【以】【不】【再】【会】【由】【爱】【她】【而】【生】【出】【烦】【恼】【、】【焦】【虑】【和】【痛】【苦】【了】【,】【所】【以】【反】【得】【“】【安】【静】【”】【了】【。】【也】【许】【这】【样】【为】【自】【己】【考】【虑】【正】【是】【人】【性】【的】【一】【种】【弱】【点】【,】【但】【是】【坦】【陈】【这】【一】【隐】【秘】【,】【非】【但】【不】【使】【人】【反】【感】【和】【厌】【恶】【,】【反】【而】【有】【一】【种】【令】【人】【震】【惊】【的】【真】【实】【,】【而】【且】【让】【人】【感】【到】【他】【是】【真】【的】【为】【三】【姑】【娘】【动】【过】【心】【的】【。】【有】【人】【总】【以】【为】【内】【心】【隐】【秘】【之】【事】【是】【羞】【于】【见】【人】【的】【,】【所】【以】【往】【往】【将】【内】【心】【严】【实】【地】【包】【裹】【起】【来】【。】【这】【就】【把】【读】【者】【当】【做】【陌】【生】【人】【了】【,】【如】【果】【能】【把】【读】【者】【当】【做】【可】【以】【信】【赖】【的】【朋】【友】【,】【那】【么】【就】【能】【敞】【开】【心】【扉】【,】【无】【所】【不】【谈】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【的】【成】【功】【还】【在】【于】【做】【到】【了】【感】【性】【和】【理】【性】【的】【结】【合】【。】【文】【中】【“】【我】【想】【,】【凭】【你】【的】【聪】【明】【,】【也】【许】【你】【早】【就】【察】【觉】【到】【了】【我】【对】【你】【的】【那】【份】【感】【情】【,】【但】【你】【却】【有】【意】【误】【读】【,】【你】【简】【直】【是】【一】【个】【善】【于】【处】【理】【棘】【手】【问】【题】【的】【高】【手】【;】【如】【果】【你】【真】【的】【没】【有】【看】【出】【我】【的】【心】【思】【,】【那】【你】【可】【以】【说】【是】【一】【个】【专】【心】【读】【书】【而】【心】【无】【旁】【骛】【的】【可】【爱】【的】【书】【呆】【子】【”】【这】【一】【句】【堪】【称】【妙】【笔】【,】【深】【得】【一】【些】【老】【师】【的】【欣】【赏】【。】【想】【想】【也】【是】【,】【这】【是】【她】【跳】【出】【感】【情】【的】【漩】【涡】【之】【后】【,】【用】【旁】【观】【者】【的】【眼】【光】【作】【出】【的】【理】【性】【思】【考】【,】【可】【谓】【入】【木】【三】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【言】【的】【简】【练】【优】【美】【是】【文】【章】【的】【又】【一】【特】【点】【,】【比】【如】【文】【中】【那】【段】【“】【十】【秒】【钟】【”】【的】【描】【写】【就】【很】【精】【彩】【。】【如】【果】【笼】【统】【地】【写】【自】【己】【的】【内】【心】【紧】【张】【,】【简】【单】【是】【简】【单】【了】【,】【却】【少】【了】【神】【韵】【,】【现】【在】【用】【了】【铺】【陈】【的】【手】【法】【,】【用】【了】【繁】【笔】【,】【就】【把】【一】【个】【女】【孩】【子】【特】【定】【时】【刻】【的】【那】【种】【心】【情】【活】【灵】【活】【现】【地】【表】【现】【了】【出】【来】【。】【从】【这】【个】【意】【义】【上】【说】【,】【“】【早】【恋】【”】【是】【会】【影】【响】【学】【习】【的】【,】【那】【样】【,】【哪】【能】【安】【下】【心】【来】【好】【好】【读】【书】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【记】【得】【上】【个】【除】【夕】【夜】【,】【我】【洗】【漱】【完】【毕】【后】【,】【躺】【在】【床】【上】【,】【心】【里】【默】【默】【地】【想】【着】【:】【希】【望】【新】【的】【一】【年】【快】【点】【儿】【到】【来】【,】【这】【个】【晚】【上】【快】【点】【儿】【过】【去】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】小学生心理健康教育【<】【p】【>】【教】【育】【上】【,】【老】【师】【上】【课】【用】【u】【盘】【把】【要】【上】【的】【内】【容】【传】【给】【每】【一】【个】【同】【学】【的】【电】【脑】【上】【,】【让】【电】【脑】【为】【学】【生】【自】【动】【讲】【解】【,】【学】【生】【有】【不】【懂】【的】【便】【可】【以】【向】【老】【师】【提】【问】【,】【这】【样】【,】【老】【师】【轻】【松】【,】【学】【生】【也】【轻】【松】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【中】【考】【凝】【眸】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【千】【古】【文】【章】【意】【为】【本】【。】【考】【场】【作】【文】【更】【如】【此】【。】【意】【胜】【则】【文】【胜】【,】【意】【顺】【则】【文】【顺】【。】【“】【诗】【文】【美】【者】【,】【命】【意】【必】【善】【”】【,】【立】【意】【“】【善】【”】【文】【章】【才】【会】【“】【美】【”】【。】【立】【意】【不】【正】【确】【,】【文】【章】【的】【效】【果】【就】【不】【好】【;】【立】【意】【不】【深】【刻】【,】【文】【章】【的】【思】【想】【意】【义】【就】【不】【高】【,】【就】【没】【有】【多】【大】【的】【价】【值】【。】【“】【文】【贵】【乎】【自】【得】【”】【,】【“】【言】【前】【人】【所】【未】【言】【,】【发】【前】【人】【所】【未】【发】【”】【,】【让】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【的】【文】【章】【才】【能】【让】【人】【喜】【爱】【。】【文】【章】【最】【忌】【随】【人】【后】【,】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【,】【拾】【人】【牙】【慧】【是】【很】【让】【人】【厌】【烦】【的】【。】【因】【此】【,】【我】【们】【在】【写】【文】【章】【时】【必】【须】【要】【注】【意】【立】【意】【的】【新】【颖】【、】【深】【刻】【,】【这】【样】【才】【能】【打】【动】【人】【,】【给】【人】【以】【别】【开】【生】【面】【的】【新】【颖】【之】【感】【。】【有】【些】【同】【学】【文】【笔】【本】【不】【错】【,】【可】【是】【在】【写】【作】【时】【不】【注】【意】【立】【意】【,】【这】【就】【导】【致】【了】【作】【文】【格】【调】【不】【高】【,】【最】【终】【不】【能】【得】【高】【分】【,】【这】【是】【很】【可】【惜】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【感】【悟】【升】【格】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【下】【面】【一】【篇】【题】【为】【《】【礼】【物】【》】【的】【作】【文】【文】【笔】【本】【不】【错】【,】【可】【是】【在】【立】【意】【上】【却】【出】【了】【问】【题】【,】【这】【是】【很】【可】【惜】【的】【。】【《】【礼】【物】【》】【一】【文】【在】【叙】【述】【一】【对】【农】【村】【父】【女】【(】【女】【儿】【是】【“】【我】【”】【妈】【妈】【的】【学】【生】【)】【给】【“】【我】【”】【家】【送】【来】【一】【篮】【子】【鸡】【蛋】【,】【“】【我】【”】【妈】【妈】【当】【即】【拒】【绝】【了】【对】【方】【的】【礼】【物】【之】【后】【,】【写】【了】【这】【样】【一】【段】【话】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【,】【您】【毅】【然】【决】【然】【地】【拒】【绝】【了】【他】【们】【父】【女】【俩】【送】【来】【的】【鸡】【蛋】【,】【把】【歪】【风】【邪】【气】【挡】【在】【了】【门】【外】【,】【您】【真】【是】【一】【个】【洁】【身】【自】【好】【的】【好】【人】【,】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【您】【在】【我】【的】【眼】【里】【变】【得】【异】【常】【高】【大】【,】【您】【真】【是】【我】【的】【好】【妈】【妈】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【这】【段】【话】【来】【看】【,】【作】【者】【简】【单】【地】【将】【鸡】【蛋】【与】【其】【他】【礼】【物】【画】【上】【等】【号】【,】【没】【有】【认】【识】【到】【寄】【托】【在】【鸡】【蛋】【里】【面】【的】【是】【父】【女】【俩】【对】【老】【师】【的】【感】【激】【之】【情】【,】【‘】【结】【果】【错】【误】【地】【把】【农】【村】【父】【女】【送】【鸡】【蛋】【说】【成】【是】【“】【歪】【风】【邪】【气】【”】【。】【同】【时】【,】【对】【礼】【物】【一】【概】【拒】【绝】【,】【也】【是】【一】【种】【不】【加】【分】【析】【的】【绝】【对】【做】【法】【,】【不】【应】【该】【盲】【目】【赞】【扬】【。】【因】【此】【,】【修】【改】【这】【段】【话】【,】【应】【该】【准】【确】【把】【握】【父】【女】【俩】【的】【内】【心】【世】【界】【,】【辩】【证】【看】【待】【是】【否】【收】【礼】【的】【行】【为】【,】【从】【而】【实】【现】【立】【意】【的】【高】【远】【和】【新】【奇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【改】【后】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【知】【道】【,】【您】【并】【不】【是】【嫌】【弃】【这】【礼】【物】【不】【值】【钱】【、】【不】【珍】【贵】【。】【但】【是】【,】【您】【知】【道】【那】【里】【渗】【透】【了】【那】【父】【女】【俩】【对】【您】【的】【几】【多】【感】【激】【之】【情】【吗】【?】【您】【知】【道】【他】【们】【走】【了】【多】【远】【的】【路】【程】【才】【来】【到】【这】【个】【陌】【生】【的】【、】【冷】【漠】【的】【城】【市】【吗】【?】【您】【知】【道】【他】【们】【鼓】【起】【多】【大】【的】【勇】【气】【才】【敢】【举】【手】【敲】【击】【老】【师】【家】【的】【门】【吗】【?】【就】【是】【因】【为】【您】【的】【拒】【绝】【。】【他】【们】【心】【里】【会】【蒙】【上】【一】【层】【被】【人】【瞧】【不】【起】【的】【阴】【影】【,】【他】【们】【又】【该】【灰】【溜】【溜】【地】【将】【鸡】【蛋】【如】【数】【拿】【回】【去】【。】【他】【们】【的】【自】【尊】【,】【受】【到】【了】【多】【大】【的】【打】【击】【啊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【,】【这】【不】【是】【用】【来】【行】【贿】【的】【礼】【物】【,】【这】【只】【是】【老】【百】【姓】【最】【朴】【实】【的】【真】【情】【表】【达】【。】【您】【为】【什】【么】【就】【不】【能】【高】【兴】【地】【收】【下】【来】【,】【然】【后】【回】【赠】【一】【些】【礼】【物】【给】【他】【们】【呢】【?】【—】【—】【接】【受】【真】【情】【,】【体】【恤】【他】【人】【,】【原】【本】【也】【是】【一】【种】【修】【养】【啊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【修】【改】【之】【后】【的】【文】【章】【,】【抓】【住】【父】【女】【俩】【送】【鸡】【蛋】【的】【本】【来】【意】【义】【,】【提】【出】【了】【合】【情】【合】【理】【的】【新】【建】【议】【,】【给】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【存】【在】【问】【题】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【多】【次】【参】【加】【中】【考】【作】【文】【的】【阅】【卷】【工】【作】【,】【发】【现】【一】【些】【考】【生】【在】【立】【意】【上】【经】【常】【存】【在】【如】【下】【问】【题】【,】【很】【值】【得】【我】【们】【深】【思】【与】【借】【鉴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【具】【体】【说】【来】【,】【主】【要】【表】【现】【在】【如】【下】【几】【个】【方】【面】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【是】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【显】【陈】【旧】【。】【平】【时】【人】【家】【怎】【么】【说】【,】【他】【就】【怎】【么】【说】【;】【过】【去】【这】【么】【说】【,】【现】【在】【还】【是】【这】【么】【说】【;】【题】【目】【中】【的】【导】【语】【有】【个】【什】【么】【观】【点】【,】【他】【绝】【对】【不】【敢】【提】【出】【异】【议】【来】【的】【。】【这】【样】【的】【作】【文】【,】【可】【以】【说】【是】【老】【生】【常】【谈】【,】【人】【云】【亦】【云】【,】【了】【无】【新】【意】【。】【比】【如】【,】【以】【“】【沟】【通】【”】【为】【话】【题】【写】【作】【,】【很】【多】【同】【学】【不】【约】【而】【同】【地】【以】【“】【我】【们】【要】【和】【父】【母】【多】【多】【沟】【通】【”】【为】【中】【心】【,】【选】【取】【一】【两】【个】【故】【事】【来】【表】【达】【。】【这】【些】【文】【章】【,】【立】【意】【一】【般】【,】【得】【分】【都】【较】【低】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【是】【浅】【尝】【辄】【止】【显】【肤】【浅】【。】【不】【能】【由】【表】【及】【里】【、】【由】【浅】【入】【深】【、】【由】【果】【推】【因】【、】【由】【形】【观】【神】【地】【审】【察】【事】【物】【,】【不】【能】【透】【过】【现】【象】【深】【入】【本】【质】【,】【透】【过】【表】【象】【看】【到】【真】【相】【,】【经】【由】【问】【题】【揭】【示】【原】【因】【,】【经】【由】【形】【式】【洞】【察】【内】【涵】【。】【这】【样】【一】【来】【,】【看】【问】【题】【就】【只】【能】【停】【留】【在】【表】【面】【了】【。】【具】【体】【地】【说】【,】【他】【们】【的】【文】【章】【只】【能】【回】【答】【“】【是】【什】【么】【”】【“】【有】【什】【么】【”】【这】【一】【类】【的】【问】【题】【,】【而】【不】【能】【涉】【及】【“】【为】【什】【么】【”】【“】【怎】【么】【办】【”】【一】【类】【较】【深】【入】【的】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【是】【剑】【走】【偏】【锋】【显】【消】【极】【。】【不】【遵】【从】【社】【会】【公】【认】【、】【真】【善】【美】【的】【标】【准】【,】【不】【遵】【从】【国】【家】【的】【法】【律】【法】【规】【精】【神】【,】【只】【想】【着】【一】【鸣】【惊】【人】【,】【提】【出】【危】【言】【耸】【听】【的】【观】【点】【。】【比】【如】【,】【有】【人】【讲】【诚】【信】【吃】【大】【亏】【,】【还】【是】【虚】【伪】【一】【些】【、】【实】【际】【一】【些】【好】【;】【有】【人】【认】【为】【牺】【牲】【自】【己】【去】【救】【人】【是】【犯】【傻】【,】【不】【如】【明】【哲】【保】【身】【;】【有】【人】【提】【出】【应】【该】【尊】【重】【个】【人】【自】【由】【,】【允】【许】【中】【学】【生】【谈】【恋】【爱】【,】【等】【等】【。】【这】【种】【思】【想】【认】【识】【上】【的】【偏】【差】【如】【果】【出】【现】【在】【考】【场】【作】【文】【上】【,】【即】【使】【文】【章】【结】【构】【完】【整】【、】【语】【言】【生】【动】【,】【也】【不】【会】【得】【到】【高】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【是】【贪】【多】【求】【全】【显】【盲】【目】【。】【不】【集】【中】【在】【某】【一】【个】【主】【题】【上】【,】【中】【途】【转】【向】【另】【一】【个】【主】【题】【,】【从】【而】【使】【得】【已】【确】【立】【的】【中】【心】【不】【能】【贯】【穿】【始】【终】【,】【读】【者】【也】【理】【不】【出】【头】【绪】【。】【结】【果】【让】【人】【读】【后】【如】【在】【云】【里】【雾】【里】【,】【不】【知】【所】【云】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【满】【分】【例】【析】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【感】【谢】【苦】【难】【 】【湖】【南】【益】【阳】【考】【生】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【秋】【天】【的】【果】【实】【感】【谢】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【,】【才】【有】【了】【成】【熟】【的】【筋】【骨】【;】【感】【谢】【光】【照】【日】【晒】【,】【才】【有】【了】【成】【熟】【的】【俊】【秀】【。】【是】【的】【,】【没】【有】【风】【雨】【光】【热】【,】【它】【不】【可】【能】【走】【向】【丰】【硕】【、】【走】【向】【成】【熟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【是】【痛】【苦】【的】【,】【人】【们】【都】【尽】【可】【能】【逃】【避】【它】【。】【平】【坦】【、】【安】【逸】【是】【许】【多】【人】【所】【渴】【望】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亚】【里】【士】【多】【德】【说】【:】【“】【没】【有】【经】【过】【灾】【难】【的】【是】【一】【堆】【垃】【圾】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【,】【人】【们】【不】【懂】【得】【什】【么】【是】【坚】【强】【。】【一】【张】【从】【未】【出】【过】【海】【的】【风】【帆】【,】【一】【旦】【在】【海】【上】【遇】【到】【风】【暴】【,】【就】【注】【定】【不】【能】【控】【制】【方】【向】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【,】【人】【们】【就】【不】【懂】【得】【什】【么】【是】【忍】【受】【。】【只】【有】【懂】【得】【忍】【受】【的】【人】【才】【能】【最】【终】【创】【出】【自】【己】【的】【一】【片】【天】【地】【,】【而】【不】【懂】【得】【忍】【受】【的】【人】【很】【容】【易】【在】【困】【难】【面】【前】【放】【弃】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【,】【人】【们】【就】【不】【懂】【得】【进】【步】【。】【苦】【难】【是】【台】【阶】【,】【正】【是】【这】【一】【个】【个】【苦】【难】【的】【台】【阶】【,】【才】【可】【能】【助】【你】【登】【上】【成】【功】【的】【高】【台】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【,】【人】【们】【就】【是】【一】【潭】【死】【水】【,】【静】【止】【而】【没】【有】【前】【进】【的】【动】【力】【。】【瀑】【流】【正】【是】【经】【历】【沙】【砾】【阻】【石】【,】【忍】【受】【痛】【苦】【,】【用】【自】【己】【流】【动】【的】【身】【躯】【与】【之】【搏】【斗】【,】【最】【终】【到】【达】【峭】【崖】【,】【纵】【身】【一】【跃】【,】【一】【泻】【而】【下】【,】【气】【势】【磅】【礴】【。】【蝴】【蝶】【能】【够】【冲】【破】【茧】【的】【束】【缚】【,】【翩】【然】【起】【舞】【于】【花】【丛】【中】【,】【正】【是】【因】【为】【在】【努】【力】【挣】【脱】【茧】【的】【过】【程】【中】【,】【使】【自】【己】【的】【翅】【膀】【充】【了】【血】【,】【从】【而】【变】【得】【强】【健】【有】【力】【。】【而】【历】【史】【许】【多】【为】【人】【称】【颂】【的】【人】【,】【也】【是】【因】【为】【他】【们】【能】【经】【历】【一】【番】【艰】【辛】【,】【最】【终】【实】【现】【自】【己】【的】【理】【想】【。】【李】【时】【珍】【不】【经】【历】【千】【辛】【万】【苦】【,】【跋】【山】【涉】【水】【,】【怎】【能】【写】【出】【《】【本】【草】【纲】【目】【》】【;】【爱】【迪】【生】【不】【尝】【试】【世】【间】【千】【万】【种】【金】【属】【材】【料】【,】【怎】【能】【发】【现】【最】【适】【合】【做】【灯】【丝】【的】【钨】【;】【红】【军】【不】【经】【历】【二】【万】【五】【千】【里】【长】【征】【,】【不】【经】【历】【艰】【苦】【岁】【月】【的】【磨】【炼】【,】【怎】【能】【成】【为】【中】【华】【民】【族】【解】【放】【的】【功】【臣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【应】【感】【谢】【风】【吹】【雨】【打】【,】【就】【像】【果】【实】【感】【谢】【风】【霜】【雨】【雪】【一】【样】【。】【怀】【着】【勇】【敢】【的】【心】【去】【迎】【接】【苦】【难】【的】【洗】【礼】【,】【怀】【着】【感】【恩】【的】【心】【去】【接】【受】【上】【帝】【赐】【予】【人】【类】【最】【宝】【贵】【的】【礼】【物】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【极】【有】【特】【色】【的】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【。】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【透】【过】【材】【料】【准】【确】【地】【把】【握】【了】【隐】【藏】【其】【中】【的】【核】【心】【意】【蕴】【:】【苦】【难】【、】【磨】【炼】【对】【成】【长】【的】【意】【义】【。】【紧】【扣】【着】【这】【一】【意】【旨】【,】【小】【作】【者】【开】【头】【从】【正】【反】【两】【方】【面】【阐】【述】【。】【发】【掘】【了】【苦】【难】【对】【成】【熟】【、】【成】【才】【的】【意】【义】【。】【文】【章】【主】【体】【部】【分】【每】【段】【反】【入】【正】【立】【,】【依】【次】【检】【阅】【苦】【难】【对】【人】【的】【坚】【强】【、】【韧】【性】【、】【进】【步】【、】【动】【力】【诸】【方】【面】【的】【作】【用】【,】【从】【个】【人】【到】【团】【体】【,】【从】【成】【才】【到】【立】【国】【,】【视】【野】【开】【阔】【,】【立】【意】【深】【刻】【,】【说】【理】【透】【辟】【,】【因】【而】【结】【尾】【总】【结】【的】【“】【感】【谢】【”】【就】【特】【别】【富】【于】【激】【励】【性】【。】【这】【篇】【满】【分】【作】【文】【启】【示】【我】【们】【,】【要】【写】【好】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【首】【先】【要】【吃】【透】【题】【旨】【,】【确】【立】【主】【题】【要】【单】【一】【集】【中】【,】【立】【意】【观】【点】【要】【正】【确】【、】【高】【远】【,】【从】【多】【个】【角】【度】【充】【分】【发】【掘】【立】【意】【的】【思】【想】【,】【这】【样】【才】【能】【使】【文】【章】【主】【题】【突】【出】【,】【格】【调】【高】【迈】【,】【超】【出】【同】【类】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【技】【法】【总】【结】【】】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【通】【过】【上】【面】【对】【中】【学】【生】【作】【文】【立】【意】【存】【在】【问】【题】【的】【分】【析】【及】【例】【文】【剖】【析】【,】【我】【们】【可】【以】【总】【结】【出】【中】【考】【作】【文】【要】【想】【以】【“】【意】【”】【取】【胜】【,】【必】【须】【做】【到】【如】【下】【四】【点】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【是】【准】【。】【所】【谓】【准】【,】【就】【是】【立】【意】【要】【符】【合】【客】【观】【事】【物】【的】【本】【质】【和】【规】【律】【,】【表】【达】【出】【来】【的】【思】【想】【观】【点】【和】【感】【情】【要】【健】【康】【、】【积】【极】【向】【上】【。】【立】【意】【准】【确】【是】【写】【好】【作】【文】【的】【基】【本】【要】【求】【,】【也】【是】【评】【价】【文】【章】【的】【重】【要】【标】【准】【。】【一】【般】【来】【说】【,】【我】【们】【的】【立】【意】【要】【与】【我】【们】【目】【前】【国】【家】【倡】【导】【的】【公】【德】【相】【一】【致】【,】【要】【与】【当】【前】【的】【时】【代】【精】【神】【相】【一】【致】【。】【如】【:】【歌】【颂】【真】【、】【善】【、】【美】【,】【抨】【击】【假】【、】【丑】【、】【恶】【,】【提】【倡】【以】【人】【为】【本】【、】【爱】【国】【、】【诚】【信】【、】【环】【境】【保】【护】【、】【无】【私】【奉】【献】【等】【等】【。】【决】【不】【能】【表】【现】【厌】【世】【消】【极】【的】【思】【想】【,】【或】【者】【是】【为】【那】【些】【腐】【败】【分】【子】【、】【迷】【信】【分】【子】【歌】【功】【颂】【德】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【是】【明】【。】【议】【论】【文】【观】【点】【不】【清】【,】【似】【是】【而】【非】【,】【模】【棱】【两】【可】【;】【记】【叙】【文】【主】【题】【不】【明】【,】【含】【含】【糊】【糊】【,】【形】【散】【神】【散】【,】【“】【几】【只】【黄】【鹂】【鸣】【翠】【柳】【”】【,】【这】【都】【是】【作】【文】【的】【大】【忌】【。】【这】【个】【问】【题】【的】【出】【现】【自】【然】【与】【作】【者】【的】【认】【识】【水】【平】【有】【关】【,】【但】【也】【与】【“】【意】【在】【笔】【后】【…】【‘】【下】【笔】【匆】【匆】【”】【有】【关】【,】【所】【以】【写】【前】【要】【先】【想】【好】【自】【己】【的】【写】【作】【目】【的】【,】【写】【时】【要】【将】【观】【点】【、】【主】【题】【尽】【量】【用】【一】【句】【话】【具】【体】【明】【确】【地】【体】【现】【出】【来】【,】【不】【要】【让】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【去】【“】【提】【炼】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【是】【新】【。】【如】【何】【“】【新】【”】【呢】【?】【就】【是】【要】【选】【好】【切】【入】【点】【,】【力】【争】【“】【道】【他】【人】【之】【所】【未】【道】【”】【,】【写】【出】【别】【人】【没】【有】【写】【出】【来】【的】【东】【西】【。】【很】【多】【事】【情】【都】【是】【“】【横】【看】【成】【岭】【侧】【成】【峰】【,】【远】【近】【高】【低】【各】【不】【同】【”】【的】【,】【因】【为】【社】【会】【是】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【的】【,】【答】【案】【是】【多】【种】【多】【样】【的】【。】【同】【样】【的】【事】【情】【,】【从】【不】【同】【角】【度】【去】【审】【视】【,】【就】【能】【有】【新】【感】【受】【。】【比】【如】【“】【郑】【人】【买】【履】【”】【的】【故】【事】【,】【千】【百】【年】【来】【一】【直】【被】【用】【来】【讽】【刺】【一】【些】【教】【条】【主】【义】【者】【,】【但】【有】【个】【同】【学】【在】【做】【《】【怎】【样】【正】【确】【看】【待】【分】【数】【》】【的】【文】【章】【里】【从】【这】【一】【古】【老】【的】【故】【事】【中】【却】【“】【榨】【”】【出】【了】【新】【“】【汁】【”】【来】【一】【将】【那】【个】【郑】【国】【人】【说】【成】【是】【“】【高】【分】【低】【能】【”】【。】【这】【确】【实】【很】【“】【新】【鲜】【”】【,】【但】【这】【一】【观】【点】【是】【经】【过】【合】【理】【的】【推】【理】【而】【来】【的】【:】【郑】【国】【人】【对】【买】【履】【要】【带】【脚】【的】【尺】【码】【这】【一】【生】【活】【知】【识】【记】【得】【非】【常】【牢】【固】【,】【但】【来】【到】【市】【场】【上】【而】【把】【尺】【码】【忘】【在】【家】【里】【时】【,】【却】【不】【知】【“】【活】【用】【”】【知】【识】【用】【脚】【试】【…】【…】【这】【样】【的】【观】【点】【哪】【能】【不】【让】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【是】【深】【。】【就】【是】【写】【出】【别】【人】【写】【不】【出】【来】【的】【东】【西】【。】【欧】【阳】【修】【在】【作】【文】【上】【主】【张】【“】【辞】【必】【己】【出】【”】【,】【他】【自】【己】【在】【写】【作】【中】【也】【是】【力】【争】【做】【到】【这】【一】【点】【的】【。】【欧】【阳】【修】【煞】【费】【苦】【心】【写】【完】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【之】【后】【常】【拿】【给】【朋】【友】【看】【一】【看】【,】【当】【文】【章】【得】【到】【朋】【友】【的】【赞】【赏】【时】【,】【他】【却】【常】【常】【忧】【心】【忡】【忡】【,】【认】【为】【自】【己】【的】【文】【章】【观】【点】【还】【没】【有】【超】【过】【别】【人】【,】【仍】【然】【停】【滞】【在】【一】【般】【人】【的】【认】【识】【水】【平】【上】【;】【而】【当】【朋】【友】【们】【都】【摇】【头】【叹】【息】【时】【,】【他】【却】【沾】【沾】【自】【喜】【,】【心】【满】【意】【足】【,】【认】【为】【这】【才】【是】【一】【篇】【真】【正】【的】【好】【文】【章】【。】【欧】【阳】【修】【的】【做】【法】【似】【乎】【“】【过】【分】【”】【了】【一】【点】【儿】【,】【但】【他】【追】【求】【的】【目】【标】【没】【有】【错】【,】【倘】【若】【自】【己】【的】【文】【章】【仍】【然】【停】【留】【在】【别】【人】【的】【认】【识】【水】【平】【之】【下】【,】【那】【么】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【还】【有】【什】【么】【存】【在】【的】【价】【值】【呢】【?】【王】【蒙】【说】【:】【“】【作】【家】【要】【有】【真】【知】【灼】【见】【”】【。】【对】【于】【中】【学】【生】【来】【讲】【,】【作】【文】【中】【电】【应】【该】【力】【求】【“】【真】【知】【灼】【见】【”】【,】【有】【“】【真】【知】【灼】【见】【”】【的】【文】【章】【才】【有】【成】【为】【上】【乘】【之】【作】【的】【可】【能】【。】【需】【要】【提】【醒】【的】【是】【,】【不】【要】【为】【了】【追】【求】【“】【新】【”】【“】【深】【”】【而】【误】【入】【歧】【途】【,】【“】【新】【”】【“】【深】【”】【不】【是】【片】【面】【偏】【激】【,】【不】【是】【大】【放】【厥】【词】【,】【不】【是】【歪】【理】【邪】【说】【。】【思】【想】【健】【康】【、】【观】【点】【正】【确】【的】【作】【文】【,】【才】【能】【在】【中】【考】【中】【取】【得】【高】【分】【。】小学生心理健康教育【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【还】【没】【来】【得】【及】【回】【味】【春】【天】【的】【盎】【然】【,】【酷】【热】【的】【夏】【天】【又】【快】【要】【与】【我】【们】【挥】【手】【告】【别】【,】【我】【正】【是】【在】【这】【样】【的】【季】【节】【回】【到】【家】【乡】【伊】【犁】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【迷】【人】【的】【昭】【苏】【风】【光】【,】【遍】【地】【野】【花】【,】【蓝】【天】【、】【白】【云】【…】【…】【夏】【季】【的】【最】【后】【期】【待】【,】【美】【丽】【的】【昭】【苏】【,】【我】【们】【来】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奇】【形】【的】【白】【石】【峰】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【伊】【宁】【市】【出】【发】【,】【经】【过】【察】【布】【查】【尔】【锡】【伯】【族】【自】【治】【县】【,】【在】【去】【往】【昭】【苏】【的】【路】【途】【中】【,】【有】【一】【座】【座】【陡】【峭】【的】【山】【峰】【,】【听】【爸】【爸】【讲】【,】【 】【这】【些】【山】【峰】【由】【灰】【岩】【构】【成】【,】【远】【观】【呈】【灰】【白】【色】【,】【因】【而】【得】【名】【“】【白】【石】【峰】【”】【,】【锡】【伯】【语】【称】【其】【沙】【颜】【哈】【达】【,】【亦】【为】【白】【峰】【之】【意】【。】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【些】【白】【色】【的】【石】【头】【像】【一】【块】【块】【的】【豆】【腐】【用】【刀】【切】【过】【后】【拼】【成】【的】【一】【样】【,】【尽】【管】【“】【齐】【”】【却】【又】【不】【规】【则】【。】【看】【,】【那】【山】【顶】【的】【石】【头】【多】【像】【一】【只】【鹰】【,】【霸】【气】【地】【伫】【立】【在】【那】【里】【;】【在】【半】【山】【腰】【上】【,】【几】【朵】【柔】【软】【的】【白】【云】【,】【轻】【盈】【地】【飘】【浮】【着】【,】【像】【是】【给】【山】【峰】【披】【上】【了】【一】【层】【薄】【纱】【…】【…】【这】【白】【石】【峰】【仿】【佛】【是】【舞】【台】【上】【的】【一】【张】【大】【幕】【,】【逐】【渐】【向】【我】【展】【开】【了】【昭】【苏】【的】【美】【景】【—】【—】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【金】【黄】【的】【诱】【惑】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【昭】【苏】【的】【油】【菜】【花】【,】【香】【飘】【万】【里】【,】【满】【眼】【金】【黄】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【进】【昭】【苏】【县】【的】【地】【域】【,】【在】【道】【路】【的】【两】【旁】【,】【随】【处】【可】【见】【田】【野】【中】【一】【片】【片】【的】【油】【菜】【花】【。】【七】【月】【末】【的】【伊】【犁】【,】【必】【去】【昭】【苏】【看】【油】【菜】【花】【的】【盛】【开】【。】【置】【身】【其】【中】【,】【如】【踏】【上】【金】【色】【的】【地】【毯】【。】【我】【从】【小】【就】【学】【过】【“】【儿】【童】【逐】【走】【追】【黄】【蝶】【,】【飞】【入】【菜】【花】【不】【出】【来】【”】【的】【诗】【句】【,】【如】【今】【才】【真】【正】【领】【略】【到】【了】【油】【菜】【花】【的】【金】【黄】【和】【这】【句】【诗】【的】【真】【正】【意】【境】【。】【一】【望】【无】【际】【的】【油】【菜】【花】【,】【细】【细】【观】【察】【:】【娇】【小】【的】【花】【瓣】【,】【嫩】【黄】【的】【花】【蕊】【,】【就】【这】【么】【一】【朵】【朵】【、】【一】【簇】【簇】【地】【长】【成】【了】【一】【大】【朵】【油】【菜】【花】【。】【其】【实】【,】【一】【朵】【油】【菜】【花】【也】【并】【不】【好】【看】【,】【但】【无】【数】【的】【油】【菜】【花】【连】【在】【一】【起】【,】【却】【成】【就】【了】【“】【万】【亩】【油】【菜】【花】【”】【这】【并】【不】【多】【见】【的】【胜】【景】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【空】【湛】【蓝】【,】【朵】【朵】【白】【云】【点】【缀】【,】【巍】【峨】【的】【天】【山】【雪】【峰】【,】【在】【金】【黄】【的】【色】【彩】【下】【,】【在】【碧】【绿】【的】【草】【场】【映】【衬】【下】【,】【形】【成】【了】【一】【幅】【天】【然】【的】【油】【画】【,】【壮】【观】【、】【唯】【美】【、】【如】【梦】【如】【幻】【。】【每】【到】【这】【个】【季】【节】【,】【各】【地】【的】【游】【客】【便】【纷】【至】【沓】【来】【,】【昭】【苏】【也】【就】【迎】【来】【了】【旅】【游】【的】【高】【峰】【期】【,】【在】【金】【黄】【的】【幻】【梦】【中】【,】【人】【们】【发】【挥】【自】【己】【的】【想】【象】【,】【尽】【情】【释】【放】【着】【心】【中】【的】【豪】【情】【,】【沉】【醉】【其】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【了】【解】【格】【登】【碑】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【对】【格】【登】【碑】【早】【有】【耳】【闻】【。】【我】【曾】【经】【在】【报】【纸】【上】【知】【道】【,】【格】【登】【碑】【主】【要】【记】【载】【的】【是】【清】【军】【平】【定】【准】【噶】【尔】【部】【首】【领】【达】【瓦】【齐】【叛】【乱】【的】【经】【过】【和】【战】【绩】【。】【为】【收】【复】【伊】【犁】【,】【阿】【玉】【锡】【等】【三】【巴】【图】【鲁】【率】【2】【2】【勇】【士】【夜】【袭】【敌】【营】【。】【由】【于】【格】【登】【山】【之】【战】【是】【清】【政】【府】【平】【定】【准】【噶】【尔】【上】【层】【贵】【族】【叛】【乱】【的】【最】【后】【决】【胜】【地】【,】【所】【以】【乾】【隆】【二】【十】【五】【年】【(】【1】【7】【6】【0】【年】【)】【春】【在】【格】【登】【山】【上】【建】【碑】【记】【功】【作】【为】【纪】【念】【,】【碑】【文】【为】【乾】【隆】【皇】【帝】【亲】【手】【撰】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【碑】【的】【全】【名】【是】【《】【平】【定】【准】【噶】【尔】【勒】【铭】【格】【登】【山】【碑】【》】【,】【又】【因】【为】【这】【个】【碑】【立】【在】【格】【登】【山】【上】【,】【所】【以】【又】【叫】【格】【登】【碑】【。】【我】【仔】【细】【观】【察】【了】【这】【块】【碑】【,】【碑】【的】【顶】【端】【刻】【有】【盘】【龙】【,】【上】【面】【刻】【有】【“】【皇】【清】【”】【二】【字】【,】【背】【面】【刻】【有】【“】【万】【古】【”】【二】【字】【。】【碑】【座】【是】【日】【出】【东】【海】【的】【浮】【雕】【图】【案】【,】【碑】【文】【正】【面】【用】【满】【、】【汉】【文】【,】【背】【面】【用】【蒙】【、】【藏】【文】【共】【四】【种】【文】【字】【刻】【着】【乾】【隆】【皇】【帝】【的】【御】【笔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【今】【,】【格】【登】【碑】【已】【是】【国】【家】【级】【文】【物】【,】【距】【离】【立】【碑】【的】【1】【7】【6】【0】【年】【已】【经】【过】【去】【了】【2】【5】【0】【余】【年】【,】【尽】【管】【历】【经】【风】【霜】【雨】【雪】【,】【碑】【文】【有】【些】【斑】【驳】【,】【但】【碑】【身】【依】【旧】【完】【好】【。】【我】【去】【参】【观】【时】【,】【正】【刮】【着】【大】【风】【,】【还】【下】【起】【了】【雨】【,】【虽】【然】【是】【盛】【夏】【,】【人】【们】【都】【穿】【上】【了】【厚】【厚】【的】【外】【衣】【。】【迎】【风】【而】【走】【,】【风】【像】【要】【把】【脸】【刮】【出】【血】【来】【,】【可】【格】【登】【碑】【任】【凭】【风】【怎】【么】【考】【验】【它】【,】【都】【坚】【固】【得】【一】【动】【不】【动】【。】【格】【登】【碑】【位】【于】【中】【哈】【边】【界】【的】【格】【登】【山】【上】【,】【虽】【然】【处】【于】【祖】【国】【的】【边】【陲】【,】【但】【由】【于】【它】【具】【有】【光】【复】【中】【华】【领】【域】【、】【见】【证】【祖】【国】【大】【好】【河】【山】【的】【历】【史】【意】【义】【,】【所】【以】【到】【这】【里】【参】【观】【的】【人】【络】【绎】【不】【绝】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【参】【观】【完】【了】【格】【登】【碑】【,】【就】【要】【与】【昭】【苏】【告】【别】【了】【,】【白】【石】【峰】【也】【向】【我】【告】【别】【了】【,】【正】【徐】【徐】【远】【去】【呢】【!】【回】【到】【家】【,】【我】【翻】【看】【着】【照】【片】【,】【心】【想】【:】【明】【年】【盛】【夏】【,】【我】【一】【定】【还】【要】【去】【昭】【苏】【看】【看】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【—】【—】【横】【兰】【溪】【,】【是】【一】【个】【卧】【在】【崇】【山】【峻】【岭】【间】【,】【峡】【谷】【幽】【深】【极】【偏】【僻】【的】【小】【山】【村】【,】【中】【间】【一】【条】【小】【溪】【穿】【山】【越】【岭】【而】【过】【,】【偏】【僻】【得】【在】【地】【图】【上】【很】【难】【找】【到】【,】【小】【得】【不】【能】【再】【小】【,】【可】【见】【的】【天】【空】【,】【不】【是】【“】【天】【似】【穹】【庐】【,】【笼】【盖】【四】【野】【”】【,】【而】【是】【“】【一】【线】【天】【”】【,】【因】【此】【得】【名】【“】【横】【兰】【溪】【”】【。】【每】【天】【难】【见】【汽】【车】【,】【难】【见】【行】【人】【,】【似】【乎】【与】【世】【隔】【绝】【,】【但】【在】【我】【心】【中】【却】【大】【得】【不】【能】【再】【大】【,】【因】【为】【它】【美】【。】【不】【信】【?】【你】【看】【,】【家】【乡】【的】【路】【,】【蜿】【蜒】【曲】【折】【;】【家】【乡】【的】【山】【,】【青】【树】【翠】【蔓】【;】【家】【乡】【的】【水】【,】【别】【样】【出】【奇】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【乡】【的】【路】【,】【仅】【容】【一】【人】【通】【行】【,】【恰】【似】【“】【桃】【花】【源】【”】【的】【入】【口】【“】【初】【极】【狭】【,】【才】【通】【人】【”】【一】【般】【,】【远】【远】【望】【去】【,】【犹】【如】【一】【条】【蜿】【蜒】【长】【蛇】【,】【在】【山】【间】【左】【环】【右】【绕】【,】【逶】【迤】【前】【行】【,】【时】【隐】【时】【现】【,】【有】【时】【神】【龙】【见】【首】【不】【见】【尾】【,】【有】【时】【又】【如】【九】【曲】【荆】【江】【,】【荡】【气】【回】【肠】【。】【山】【路】【有】【近】【7】【0】【度】【的】【坡】【度】【,】【且】【路】【上】【有】【很】【滑】【的】【石】【子】【,】【在】【山】【路】【上】【行】【走】【,】【十】【分】【危】【险】【,】【稍】【有】【不】【慎】【,】【踩】【在】【石】【子】【上】【,】【就】【可】【能】【滑】【下】【山】【坡】【,】【跌】【进】【万】【丈】【深】【渊】【,】【落】【个】【粉】【身】【碎】【骨】【。】【这】【不】【由】【得】【使】【我】【想】【到】【了】【“】【蜀】【道】【难】【,】【难】【于】【上】【青】【天】【”】【,】【但】【我】【觉】【得】【,】【家】【乡】【的】【路】【一】【定】【比】【蜀】【道】【更】【难】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【乡】【的】【山】【,】【树】【木】【葱】【郁】【。】【不】【单】【这】【样】【,】【千】【里】【绝】【壁】【,】【连】【绵】【不】【断】【,】【高】【山】【耸】【入】【云】【霄】【,】【飞】【鸟】【都】【很】【难】【越】【过】【,】【飞】【瀑】【其】【间】【,】【望】【之】【蔚】【然】【神】【秀】【,】【令】【我】【不】【禁】【想】【到】【李】【白】【的】【诗】【句】【“】【飞】【流】【直】【下】【三】【千】【尺】【,】【疑】【是】【银】【河】【落】【九】【天】【”】【。】【每】【到】【冬】【天】【,】【山】【便】【穿】【上】【一】【层】【厚】【厚】【的】【白】【棉】【袄】【,】【好】【像】【生】【怕】【乡】【民】【看】【见】【她】【秀】【美】【的】【肌】【肤】【,】【这】【又】【使】【我】【在】【脑】【海】【中】【勾】【勒】【出】【一】【幅】【“】【天】【与】【云】【与】【山】【与】【水】【,】【上】【下】【一】【白】【”】【的】【冬】【雪】【图】【,】【极】【富】【诗】【情】【画】【意】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【乡】【的】【水】【,】【实】【在】【出】【奇】【—】【—】【上】【游】【的】【水】【,】【清】【澈】【见】【底】【,】【游】【鱼】【细】【石】【,】【直】【视】【无】【碍】【;】【而】【中】【游】【的】【水】【却】【是】【浑】【浊】【不】【堪】【;】【到】【了】【下】【游】【又】【与】【中】【游】【之】【水】【截】【然】【不】【同】【,】【浑】【黄】【之】【水】【渐】【渐】【变】【淡】【,】【形】【成】【了】【一】【片】【绿】【色】【的】【海】【洋】【,】【绿】【中】【透】【白】【,】【白】【中】【泛】【黑】【,】【似】【乎】【是】【一】【块】【百】【年】【难】【得】【一】【见】【的】【上】【等】【玉】【石】【。】【河】【两】【岸】【沙】【滩】【上】【是】【奇】【形】【怪】【状】【的】【鹅】【卵】【石】【,】【每】【当】【夏】【日】【山】【洪】【暴】【发】【,】【河】【浪】【拍】【打】【着】【两】【岸】【的】【石】【头】【发】【出】【震】【耳】【轰】【鸣】【,】【就】【像】【贝】【多】【芬】【在】【演】【奏】【他】【的】【生】【命】【交】【响】【曲】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【乡】【美】【景】【,】【值】【得】【一】【游】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【作】【者】【行】【文】【紧】【扣】【家】【乡】【美】【景】【,】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【,】【一】【气】【呵】【成】【,】【没】【有】【过】【多】【华】【词】【丽】【句】【,】【但】【透】【过】【字】【里】【行】【间】【,】【运】【用】【丰】【富】【的】【联】【想】【,】【引】【用】【课】【文】【所】【学】【诗】【句】【,】【为】【文】【章】【增】【色】【添】【彩】【,】【这】【是】【一】【大】【亮】【点】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【黄】【晓】【枫】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】小学生心理健康教育【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【生】【就】【像】【鹅】【卵】【石】【,】【要】【经】【过】【不】【断】【地】【打】【磨】【才】【会】【变】【得】【完】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【曾】【子】【“】【吾】【日】【三】【省】【吾】【身】【”】【,】【是】【一】【种】【打】【磨】【。】【反】【省】【是】【对】【自】【己】【的】【认】【识】【与】【评】【价】【,】【是】【千】【百】【年】【来】【圣】【人】【们】【所】【追】【求】【的】【一】【种】【高】【尚】【境】【界】【。】【在】【你】【没】【有】【对】【自】【己】【好】【好】【反】【省】【时】【,】【你】【没】【有】【资】【格】【评】【论】【别】【人】【的】【所】【作】【所】【为】【,】【因】【为】【你】【的】【今】【天】【还】【不】【完】【整】【。】【在】【做】【完】【今】【天】【所】【有】【的】【事】【情】【后】【,】【静】【下】【心】【来】【,】【回】【想】【自】【己】【的】【言】【行】【,】【是】【否】【那】【样】【做】【会】【更】【好】【,】【你】【是】【否】【应】【该】【有】【所】【改】【正】【,】【然】【后】【吸】【取】【教】【训】【,】【告】【诉】【自】【己】【:】【我】【可】【以】【做】【得】【更】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【学】【海】【无】【涯】【苦】【作】【舟】【”】【,】【是】【一】【种】【打】【磨】【。】【书】【籍】【是】【一】【片】【浩】【瀚】【的】【海】【洋】【,】【与】【天】【交】【汇】【,】【无】【穷】【无】【尽】【,】【徜】【徉】【其】【中】【,】【你】【会】【发】【现】【世】【界】【上】【还】【有】【许】【多】【奥】【秘】【你】【未】【知】【晓】【,】【你】【会】【发】【现】【人】【类】【拥】【有】【很】【多】【重】【要】【的】【东】【西】【却】【不】【珍】【视】【,】【你】【会】【发】【现】【精】【神】【比】【物】【质】【更】【重】【要】【,】【你】【会】【发】【现】【…】【…】【不】【断】【探】【索】【,】【不】【断】【挖】【掘】【,】【你】【收】【获】【的】【便】【是】【无】【价】【之】【宝】【,】【纵】【使】【有】【一】【座】【金】【山】【也】【比】【不】【上】【。】【积】【极】【思】【考】【,】【不】【断】【创】【新】【,】【你】【会】【赢】【得】【无】【数】【送】【给】【你】【的】【掌】【声】【。】【知】【识】【是】【一】【个】【人】【立】【足】【社】【会】【的】【垫】【脚】【石】【,】【它】【拥】【有】【无】【穷】【的】【力】【量】【,】【可】【以】【摧】【毁】【一】【切】【困】【难】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【梅】【花】【香】【自】【苦】【寒】【来】【”】【,】【是】【一】【种】【打】【磨】【。】【一】【切】【辉】【煌】【的】【背】【后】【都】【蕴】【涵】【着】【无】【尽】【的】【艰】【辛】【,】【因】【为】【痛】【苦】【,】【所】【以】【才】【快】【乐】【。】【吃】【得】【苦】【中】【苦】【,】【方】【为】【人】【上】【人】【。】【困】【难】【挫】【折】【都】【算】【不】【了】【什】【么】【,】【唯】【有】【坚】【持】【不】【懈】【、】【努】【力】【奋】【斗】【,】【我】【们】【才】【会】【有】【成】【功】【后】【的】【快】【乐】【。】【祖】【逖】【闻】【鸡】【起】【舞】【而】【成】【一】【代】【名】【将】【,】【杨】【时】【程】【门】【立】【雪】【而】【取】【得】【真】【才】【实】【学】【,】【还】【有】【凿】【壁】【取】【光】【的】【匡】【衡】【、】【负】【薪】【读】【书】【的】【朱】【买】【臣】【、】【映】【雪】【苦】【读】【的】【孙】【康】【、】【囊】【萤】【夜】【读】【的】【车】【胤】【、】【牛】【角】【挂】【书】【的】【李】【密】【…】【…】【都】【打】【磨】【出】【了】【闪】【光】【的】【人】【生】【,】【我】【们】【更】【应】【该】【不】【怕】【困】【难】【,】【奋】【勇】【前】【进】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【正】【如】【孟】【子】【所】【说】【:】【“】【天】【将】【降】【大】【任】【于】【斯】【人】【也】【,】【必】【先】【苦】【其】【心】【志】【,】【劳】【其】【筋】【骨】【,】【饿】【其】【体】【肤】【,】【空】【乏】【其】【身】【,】【行】【拂】【乱】【其】【所】【为】【,】【所】【以】【动】【心】【忍】【性】【,】【曾】【益】【其】【所】【不】【能】【。】【”】【只】【有】【打】【磨】【过】【的】【人】【生】【才】【会】【趋】【于】【完】【美】【,】【只】【有】【打】【磨】【过】【的】【自】【己】【才】【会】【实】【现】【远】【大】【目】【标】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【以】【,】【请】【让】【时】【间】【打】【磨】【你】【自】【己】【,】【磨】【掉】【瑕】【疵】【,】【成】【为】【一】【块】【耀】【眼】【的】【美】【玉】【吧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【贾】【春】【燕】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【在】【画】【里】【行】【,】【却】【道】【闯】【其】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【醉】【问】【何】【处】【是】【,】【乃】【悟】【云】【之】【南】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【仙】【游】【云】【之】【南】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【来】【昆】【明】【,】【天】【气】【很】【是】【凉】【快】【。】【街】【上】【的】【人】【个】【个】【都】【懒】【洋】【洋】【的】【,】【可】【不】【是】【嘛】【,】【谁】【不】【图】【个】【安】【逸】【凉】【快】【。】【这】【天】【气】【把】【人】【都】【养】【成】【了】【神】【仙】【,】【谁】【也】【不】【着】【急】【干】【什】【么】【。】【树】【下】【穿】【着】【长】【褂】【的】【老】【头】【倚】【在】【竹】【椅】【上】【,】【眯】【着】【眼】【瞅】【着】【自】【己】【吐】【的】【烟】【圈】【。】【傍】【晚】【雨】【来】【得】【很】【急】【,】【也】【似】【乎】【不】【着】【急】【走】【,】【磨】【磨】【蹭】【蹭】【的】【。】【好】【像】【在】【天】【上】【飞】【来】【飞】【去】【,】【像】【个】【小】【孩】【,】【在】【这】【儿】【猛】【哭】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【见】【没】【有】【人】【理】【他】【,】【又】【到】【另】【一】【边】【哭】【去】【了】【。】【半】【夜】【明】【明】【听】【见】【雨】【点】【猛】【打】【着】【窗】【子】【,】【突】【然】【间】【就】【没】【了】【。】【还】【以】【为】【是】【谁】【在】【恶】【作】【剧】【,】【却】【又】【是】【一】【阵】【雨】【打】【来】【。】【早】【晨】【爬】【起】【来】【,】【雨】【早】【已】【自】【己】【收】【拾】【好】【眼】【泪】【,】【一】【溜】【烟】【地】【跑】【得】【无】【影】【无】【踪】【,】【一】【点】【痕】【迹】【也】【没】【留】【下】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【“】【小】【桥】【流】【水】【人】【家】【,】【古】【道】【西】【风】【瘦】【马】【”】【的】【情】【怀】【。】【古】【镇】【的】【呼】【吸】【湿】【漉】【漉】【的】【,】【吐】【出】【的】【水】【汽】【全】【铺】【在】【凹】【凸】【不】【平】【的】【青】【石】【板】【上】【。】【古】【城】【固】【然】【好】【风】【光】【,】【但】【出】【了】【镇】【门】【,】【就】【隐】【约】【有】【些】【荒】【芜】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【香】【格】【里】【拉】【是】【个】【神】【奇】【的】【地】【方】【,】【仅】【是】【普】【达】【措】【公】【园】【就】【足】【以】【让】【你】【大】【开】【眼】【界】【。】【初】【入】【山】【谷】【那】【种】【凛】【冽】【的】【寒】【气】【让】【你】【措】【手】【不】【及】【,】【天】【空】【又】【是】【那】【样】【的】【蔚】【蓝】【,】【白】【云】【在】【它】【的】【怀】【抱】【里】【恣】【意】【地】【撒】【欢】【。】【冷】【清】【的】【湖】【面】【泛】【着】【刺】【骨】【的】【幽】【蓝】【,】【像】【地】【上】【的】【一】【只】【眼】【睛】【注】【视】【着】【你】【的】【存】【在】【、】【你】【的】【行】【动】【和】【你】【的】【轮】【回】【,】【让】【人】【心】【里】【充】【满】【了】【神】【圣】【与】【敬】【畏】【,】【会】【有】【一】【种】【不】【可】【名】【状】【的】【恐】【惧】【涌】【上】【心】【头】【。】【栈】【道】【边】【古】【树】【掩】【映】【,】【层】【层】【叠】【叠】【,】【倒】【影】【在】【湖】【面】【,】【在】【万】【籁】【俱】【寂】【中】【忽】【然】【间】【有】【几】【尾】【鱼】【从】【水】【浅】【处】【跃】【起】【,】【牵】【出】【巨】【大】【的】【漩】【涡】【,】【掉】【进】【水】【里】【便】【没】【了】【踪】【迹】【。】【不】【知】【名】【的】【昆】【虫】【伏】【在】【树】【上】【发】【出】【叽】【叽】【叫】【声】【,】【偶】【尔】【有】【几】【只】【松】【鼠】【下】【树】【来】【到】【路】【边】【,】【等】【着】【游】【人】【给】【它】【们】【喂】【食】【。】【草】【原】【好】【似】【锦】【绸】【绣】【织】【的】【,】【布】【满】【了】【彩】【色】【的】【丝】【线】【。】【花】【儿】【们】【都】【卧】【在】【地】【上】【,】【形】【态】【各】【异】【,】【闪】【着】【多】【彩】【的】【眸】【子】【,】【深】【情】【地】【注】【视】【着】【生】【养】【它】【们】【的】【大】【地】【,】【还】【有】【高】【大】【神】【秘】【的】【原】【始】【森】【林】【。】【马】【群】【在】【花】【丛】【中】【惊】【奇】【地】【注】【视】【着】【行】【人】【,】【又】【垂】【下】【头】【来】【嚼】【着】【鲜】【美】【的】【草】【叶】【;】【偶】【尔】【几】【匹】【马】【儿】【跑】【起】【,】【四】【蹄】【便】【溅】【起】【飞】【扬】【的】【泥】【花】【,】【缓】【缓】【落】【下】【。】【长】【着】【巨】【大】【盘】【角】【的】【牦】【牛】【在】【栈】【道】【边】【休】【息】【,】【当】【行】【人】【走】【过】【时】【,】【它】【们】【便】【温】【柔】【地】【摇】【着】【头】【,】【向】【你】【眨】【着】【像】【池】【水】【那】【么】【明】【澈】【而】【又】【友】【好】【的】【大】【眼】【。】【云】【之】【南】【,】【好】【一】【幅】【人】【间】【仙】【境】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【凉】【爽】【的】【天】【气】【,】【惬】【意】【的】【老】【人】【,】【淘】【气】【的】【雨】【点】【,】【神】【奇】【的】【山】【水】【,】【云】【南】【的】【风】【物】【在】【作】【者】【俯】【仰】【之】【间】【皆】【成】【画】【卷】【。】【文】【章】【以】【对】【比】【的】【手】【法】【写】【水】【,】【以】【白】【描】【的】【手】【法】【写】【山】【,】【运】【笔】【从】【容】【,】【舒】【缓】【优】【美】【,】【文】【字】【于】【悠】【然】【中】【贮】【满】【诗】【情】【画】【意】【,】【读】【来】【恍】【若】【身】【临】【其】【境】【,】【令】【人】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【明】【 】【 】【君】【)】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】小学生心理健康教育【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【河】【水】【浪】【浪】【推】【浪】【,】【巍】【峨】【之】【川】【川】【对】【川】【。】【凤】【凰】【山】【头】【凤】【鸣】【塔】【,】【沅】【水】【桥】【底】【卧】【彩】【虹】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【—】【—】【题】【记】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【沅】【陵】【,】【一】【个】【充】【满】【神】【秘】【而】【又】【美】【丽】【的】【地】【方】【,】【深】【藏】【着】【丰】【富】【的】【文】【化】【底】【蕴】【。】【沅】【陵】【以】【其】【古】【朴】【、】【深】【远】【、】【广】【厚】【、】【璀】【璨】【、】【神】【秘】【让】【世】【人】【瞩】【目】【,】【并】【在】【人】【们】【的】【不】【断】【寻】【觅】【与】【揭】【秘】【中】【缓】【缓】【掀】【起】【了】【她】【水】【墨】【般】【曼】【妙】【的】【盖】【头】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【凤】【凰】【山】【—】【—】【沅】【水】【橹】【歌】【不】【息】【的】【岸】【边】【,】【一】【座】【山】【如】【凤】【如】【凰】【,】【清】【浅】【美】【丽】【,】【遗】【世】【独】【立】【。】【古】【寺】【的】【焚】【香】【诵】【经】【,】【青】【衫】【一】【袭】【的】【脱】【净】【俗】【气】【。】【不】【经】【意】【的】【一】【次】【邂】【逅】【,】【1】【9】【3】【8】【年】【少】【帅】【张】【学】【良】【与】【赵】【一】【荻】【的】【耳】【朵】【贴】【在】【古】【老】【的】【墙】【根】【,】【无】【可】【奈】【何】【地】【聆】【听】【硝】【烟】【弥】【漫】【的】【风】【云】【:】【“】【万】【里】【碧】【空】【孤】【影】【远】【,】【故】【人】【行】【程】【路】【漫】【漫】【。】【少】【年】【渐】【渐】【鬓】【发】【老】【,】【唯】【有】【春】【风】【今】【又】【还】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【深】【秋】【是】【红】【枫】【的】【节】【日】【,】【枫】【叶】【红】【了】【,】【季】【节】【变】【了】【。】【红】【枫】【在】【晨】【雾】【的】【映】【衬】【下】【分】【外】【妖】【娆】【。】【在】【深】【秋】【时】【节】【到】【借】【母】【溪】【观】【赏】【红】【枫】【、】【红】【叶】【,】【在】【秋】【天】【转】【向】【冬】【天】【的】【时】【令】【看】【到】【霜】【叶】【红】【于】【二】【月】【花】【,】【感】【受】【自】【然】【色】【彩】【的】【更】【替】【,】【就】【会】【领】【悟】【到】【世】【界】【变】【化】【的】【奇】【妙】【,】【仿】【佛】【印】【证】【人】【生】【的】【增】【岁】【与】【轮】【回】【。】【那】【种】【“】【看】【万】【山】【红】【遍】【,】【层】【林】【尽】【染】【”】【的】【气】【势】【就】【在】【眼】【前】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【苗】【家】【的】【古】【村】【古】【寨】【,】【在】【细】【雨】【中】【或】【阳】【光】【下】【看】【来】【,】【颜】【色】【真】【无】【可】【形】【容】【。】【山】【脚】【下】【的】【树】【林】【,】【一】【些】【俨】【如】【有】【意】【为】【之】【布】【局】【恰】【到】【好】【处】【的】【小】【小】【房】【子】【,】【绕】【河】【州】【树】【林】【边】【的】【一】【弯】【溪】【水】【、】【一】【道】【长】【桥】【、】【一】【片】【烟】【云】【,】【香】【草】【山】【花】【,】【随】【手】【可】【以】【掇】【拾】【。】【《】【楚】【辞】【》】【中】【的】【山】【鬼】【、】【云】【中】【君】【,】【仿】【佛】【就】【在】【眼】【前】【。】【像】【山】【泉】【一】【样】【清】【纯】【的】【苞】【谷】【烧】【,】【捧】【出】【像】【酒】【一】【样】【热】【烈】【的】【心】【。】【站】【在】【迎】【面】【的】【贵】【客】【前】【,】【用】【苗】【家】【人】【的】【诚】【心】【,】【倒】【一】【碗】【拦】【门】【酒】【敬】【奉】【客】【人】【。】【客】【人】【们】【喝】【得】【越】【多】【,】【苗】【家】【人】【心】【里】【越】【是】【高】【兴】【,】【这】【是】【看】【得】【起】【苗】【家】【人】【,】【敬】【重】【苗】【家】【人】【。】【酒】【干】【渔】【鼓】【响】【,】【欢】【庆】【迎】【客】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【酉】【藏】【书】【洞】【—】【—】【山】【不】【高】【,】【洞】【不】【大】【,】【在】【焚】【书】【坑】【儒】【的】【冲】【天】【火】【光】【中】【,】【一】【个】【名】【叫】【伏】【胜】【的】【儒】【生】【,】【蹚】【过】【沧】【浪】【之】【水】【,】【逆】【沅】【酉】【而】【上】【,】【在】【这】【里】【,】【将】【一】【片】【片】【竹】【简】【的】【注】【脚】【诠】【释】【得】【惊】【心】【动】【魄】【。】【于】【是】【,】【就】【有】【了】【“】【学】【富】【五】【车】【,】【书】【通】【二】【酉】【”】【的】【经】【典】【,】【就】【有】【了】【泱】【泱】【中】【华】【文】【明】【的】【薪】【火】【相】【传】【,】【山】【顶】【礼】【数】【放】【歌】【,】【成】【长】【为】【另】【一】【种】【高】【度】【。】【洞】【,】【收】【纳】【烟】【云】【,】【成】【就】【另】【一】【种】【博】【大】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【上】【下】【两】【百】【里】【,】【古】【今】【两】【千】【年】【”】【,】【可】【谓】【对】【沅】【陵】【文】【化】【的】【高】【度】【概】【括】【。】【楚】【国】【诗】【人】【屈】【原】【遭】【流】【放】【,】【远】【逐】【洞】【庭】【云】【梦】【泽】【,】【逆】【湘】【江】【上】【至】【沅】【陵】【,】【写】【下】【“】【乘】【舲】【船】【余】【上】【沅】【兮】【,】【朝】【发】【枉】【渚】【兮】【,】【夕】【宿】【辰】【阳】【”】【的】【动】【人】【篇】【章】【;】【一】【代】【文】【学】【大】【师】【沈】【从】【文】【筑】【“】【芸】【芦】【”】【而】【居】【沅】【陵】【,】【称】【沅】【陵】【为】【“】【第】【二】【故】【乡】【”】【,】【并】【且】【写】【下】【“】【沅】【陵】【的】【美】【,】【美】【得】【让】【人】【心】【疼】【”】【的】【优】【美】【佳】【句】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【沅】【陵】【是】【我】【们】【眷】【恋】【的】【家】【园】【,】【也】【是】【我】【们】【的】【骄】【傲】【。】【林】【则】【徐】【“】【一】【县】【好】【山】【留】【客】【住】【,】【五】【溪】【秋】【水】【为】【君】【清】【”】【之】【美】【文】【,】【彰】【显】【出】【沅】【陵】【山】【水】【秀】【美】【、】【人】【文】【独】【特】【、】【民】【俗】【风】【情】【神】【奇】【而】【旖】【旎】【的】【无】【穷】【魅】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【以】【拟】【人】【笔】【法】【开】【篇】【,】【向】【世】【人】【展】【示】【了】【家】【乡】【沅】【陵】【的】【神】【秘】【和】【美】【丽】【:】【凤】【凰】【古】【寺】【联】【系】【着】【张】【学】【良】【和】【赵】【一】【荻】【,】【国】【家】【森】【林】【公】【园】【借】【母】【溪】【红】【枫】【的】【美】【丽】【诱】【人】【,】【苗】【家】【山】【寨】【人】【的】【淳】【朴】【和】【热】【情】【,】【二】【酉】【藏】【书】【古】【洞】【的】【历】【史】【烟】【云】【,】【更】【有】【屈】【原】【、】【林】【则】【徐】【、】【沈】【从】【文】【曾】【在】【此】【吟】【诵】【诗】【篇】【,】【留】【下】【了】【他】【们】【的】【深】【深】【足】【迹】【…】【…】【由】【此】【可】【见】【,】【作】【者】【选】【材】【的】【典】【型】【。】【全】【文】【寓】【情】【于】【景】【,】【写】【景】【说】【事】【,】【借】【景】【抒】【情】【,】【让】【世】【人】【了】【解】【了】【沅】【陵】【,】【找】【到】【了】【沈】【从】【文】【说】【出】【“】【沅】【陵】【的】【美】【,】【美】【得】【让】【人】【心】【疼】【”】【这】【句】【话】【的】【理】【由】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【向】【明】【康】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

小学生心理健康教育:沈阳大熊猫吃订制"月饼"

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【海】【市】【某】【初】【三】【年】【级】【同】【学】【以】【《】【为】【自】【己】【竖】【起】【大】【拇】【指】【》】【为】【题】【作】【文】【(】【此】【题】【为】【2】【0】【0】【2】【年】【上】【海】【市】【中】【考】【作】【文】【题】【)】【。】【其】【中】【多】【数】【同】【学】【应】【题】【而】【作】【,】【在】【文】【中】【表】【现】【自】【己】【身】【上】【的】【“】【闪】【光】【点】【”】【,】【或】【者】【写】【出】【自】【己】【的】【决】【心】【和】【勇】【气】【。】【但】【也】【有】【同】【学】【不】【愿】【依】【题】【而】【写】【,】【如】【一】【个】【同】【学】【就】【改】【题】【为】【《】【我】【看】【<】【为】【自】【己】【竖】【起】【大】【拇】【指】【>】【》】【,】【他】【认】【为】【原】【题】【不】【适】【合】【他】【。】【“】【为】【自】【己】【竖】【起】【大】【拇】【指】【”】【,】【“】【我】【不】【能】【”】【。】【为】【什】【么】【“】【不】【能】【”】【呢】【?】【他】【针】【对】【题】【目】【,】【写】【下】【了】【自】【己】【的】【看】【法】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【看】【《】【为】【自】【己】【竖】【起】【大】【拇】【指】【》】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【●】【 】【上】【海】【某】【校】【S】【同】【学】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【的】【时】【候】【,】【有】【一】【些】【人】【、】【一】【些】【事】【会】【像】【冬】【天】【飘】【荡】【的】【树】【叶】【一】【样】【浮】【现】【于】【眼】【前】【。】【而】【这】【时】【,】【我】【总】【喜】【欢】【安】【静】【下】【来】【,】【或】【坐】【或】【站】【,】【思】【绪】【开】【始】【萌】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【生】【活】【在】【普】【通】【繁】【华】【的】【大】【都】【市】【,】【天】【天】【与】【成】【千】【上】【万】【的】【人】【擦】【肩】【而】【过】【,】【我】【身】【上】【有】【值】【得】【骄】【傲】【的】【东】【西】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【,】【我】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【煮】【一】【碗】【快】【餐】【面】【的】【时】【候】【,】【世】【贸】【大】【楼】【倒】【了】【,】【众】【所】【周】【知】【,】【本】【·】【拉】【登】【干】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【哪】【家】【银】【行】【、】【珠】【宝】【店】【又】【被】【抢】【了】【,】【新】【闻】【头】【条】【登】【了】【出】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【幸】【好】【,】【不】【是】【我】【干】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【每】【天】【第】【一】【声】【鸡】【叫】【时】【,】【背】【起】【书】【包】【上】【学】【。】【太】【阳】【发】【紫】【时】【,】【再】【照】【样】【背】【回】【家】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【处】【世】【法】【则】【:】【按】【照】【他】【人】【说】【的】【做】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【题】【目】【是】【:】【为】【自】【己】【竖】【起】【大】【拇】【指】【。】【而】【我】【不】【能】【,】【我】【可】【以】【为】【任】【何】【人】【竖】【一】【下】【大】【拇】【指】【。】【但】【为】【我】【自】【己】【,】【我】【办】【不】【到】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【身】【上】【确】【确】【实】【实】【找】【不】【到】【任】【何】【一】【处】【闪】【光】【点】【,】【因】【为】【我】【懦】【弱】【、】【胆】【小】【、】【马】【虎】【,】【什】【么】【事】【也】【做】【不】【了】【。】【我】【唯】【一】【能】【夸】【赞】【的】【,】【大】【概】【是】【我】【碌】【碌】【无】【为】【,】【奉】【行】【中】【庸】【之】【道】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【通】【常】【,】【置】【身】【世】【外】【,】【而】【去】【观】【察】【世】【事】【,】【往】【往】【要】【比】【站】【在】【世】【事】【中】【看】【世】【事】【要】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【就】【像】【不】【用】【镜】【子】【,】【用】【自】【己】【的】【左】【眼】【看】【不】【到】【自】【己】【的】【右】【眼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【来】【谈】【谈】【碌】【碌】【无】【为】【,】【这】【不】【是】【什】【么】【坏】【事】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【:】【“】【棒】【打】【出】【头】【鸟】【。】【”】【更】【有】【一】【种】【做】【法】【:】【龟】【之】【类】【的】【生】【物】【,】【当】【它】【伸】【长】【脖】【子】【时】【,】【注】【定】【会】【被】【砍】【下】【。】【而】【往】【往】【砍】【下】【之】【后】【,】【仍】【瞪】【着】【眼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【社】【会】【是】【平】【衡】【的】【,】【上】【天】【每】【隔】【几】【年】【造】【一】【些】【普】【通】【的】【人】【,】【以】【维】【持】【社】【会】【稳】【定】【。】【这】【是】【必】【要】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【甚】【至】【于】【在】【许】【多】【的】【时】【候】【会】【这】【样】【想】【:】【我】【宁】【愿】【背】【个】【龟】【壳】【缩】【起】【脖】【子】【,】【沉】【浮】【于】【汪】【洋】【之】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【选】【自】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【6】【月】【1】【9】【日】【《】【新】【民】【晚】【报】【》】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【在】【班】【级】【宣】【读】【后】【,】【引】【起】【轩】【然】【大】【波】【。】【怎】【样】【评】【价】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【?】【有】【三】【种】【意】【见】【。】【一】【种】【意】【见】【是】【否】【定】【的】【,】【认】【为】【该】【文】【“】【文】【不】【对】【题】【,】【思】【想】【消】【极】【”】【,】【是】【“】【不】【及】【格】【”】【作】【文】【。】【又】【一】【种】【意】【见】【则】【是】【肯】【定】【的】【,】【认】【为】【文】【章】【能】【“】【写】【出】【真】【实】【思】【想】【,】【即】【使】【离】【经】【叛】【道】【也】【比】【那】【些】【如】【一】【个】【模】【子】【刻】【出】【来】【的】【无】【病】【呻】【吟】【、】【乱】【赶】【时】【髦】【的】【东】【西】【好】【”】【。】【再】【说】【“】【中】【庸】【之】【道】【”】【有】【什】【么】【不】【好】【?】【大】【多】【数】【人】【“】【都】【是】【平】【庸】【之】【人】【”】【。】【第】【三】【种】【意】【见】【认】【为】【“】【给】【这】【样】【的】【作】【文】【打】【不】【及】【格】【似】【乎】【没】【有】【错】【,】【特】【别】【是】【不】【能】【让】【它】【蔓】【延】【开】【去】【”】【,】【但】【是】【“】【孩】【子】【脸】【,】【六】【月】【天】【”】【,】【“】【为】【什】【么】【不】【允】【许】【他】【们】【有】【时】【发】【泄】【点】【其】【他】【的】【情】【绪】【,】【哪】【怕】【是】【‘】【灰】【色】【’】【的】【”】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【评】【价】【孰】【是】【孰】【非】【?】【很】【显】【然】【,】【争】【议】【的】【焦】【点】【不】【在】【于】【作】【文】【的】【语】【言】【形】【式】【,】【而】【在】【于】【作】【文】【表】【达】【的】【思】【想】【内】【容】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【众】【所】【周】【知】【,】【思】【想】【内】【容】【是】【文】【章】【的】【第】【一】【要】【素】【,】【一】【切】【写】【作】【手】【段】【都】【是】【为】【表】【达】【思】【想】【内】【容】【服】【务】【的】【。】【“】【情】【动】【于】【中】【而】【形】【于】【喜】【”】【(】【《】【毛】【诗】【序】【》】【)】【,】【“】【故】【情】【者】【文】【之】【经】【,】【辞】【者】【理】【之】【纬】【,】【经】【正】【而】【后】【纬】【成】【,】【理】【定】【而】【后】【辞】【畅】【,】【此】【立】【文】【之】【本】【原】【也】【”】【(】【《】【文】【心】【雕】【龙】【·】【情】【采】【》】【)】【。】【认】【定】【文】【章】【思】【想】【内】【容】【,】【并】【以】【此】【作】【为】【评】【文】【的】【首】【要】【标】【准】【,】【这】【是】【不】【错】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【问】【题】【是】【,】【怎】【样】【认】【定】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【思】【想】【内】【容】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【讲】【真】【话】【,】【抒】【真】【情】【,】【这】【是】【认】【定】【文】【章】【内】【容】【的】【前】【提】【。】【文】【以】【情】【动】【人】【,】【是】【指】【真】【情】【动】【人】【。】【不】【能】【奢】【想】【,】【虚】【情】【假】【意】【,】【矫】【情】【伪】【饰】【能】【感】【动】【人】【心】【。】【这】【就】【是】【说】【,】【如】【果】【表】【达】【的】【不】【是】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【文】【章】【就】【失】【去】【了】【表】【现】【的】【意】【义】【。】【鹦】【鹉】【学】【舌】【,】【言】【不】【由】【衷】【是】【当】【前】【中】【学】【生】【作】【文】【的】【通】【病】【。】【不】【少】【同】【学】【力】【挺】【“】【我】【看】【…】【…】【”】【一】【文】【,】【正】【是】【因】【为】【它】【“】【写】【出】【真】【实】【思】【想】【”】【。】【作】【者】【说】【:】【“】【题】【目】【是】【:】【为】【自】【己】【竖】【起】【大】【拇】【指】【。】【而】【我】【不】【能】【,】【我】【可】【以】【为】【任】【何】【人】【竖】【一】【下】【大】【拇】【指】【。】【但】【为】【我】【自】【己】【,】【我】【办】【不】【到】【。】【”】【不】【能】【就】【说】【“】【不】【能】【”】【,】【办】【不】【到】【就】【说】【“】【办】【不】【到】【”】【,】【哪】【怕】【“】【冒】【犯】【”】【题】【意】【,】【也】【要】【实】【话】【实】【说】【,】【不】【讲】【假】【话】【,】【这】【是】【作】【者】【诚】【实】【为】【文】【的】【态】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【讲】【的】【是】【真】【话】【,】【但】【是】【如】【果】【讲】【的】【是】【错】【话】【,】【这】【样】【的】【“】【真】【话】【”】【也】【值】【得】【肯】【定】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【讲】【真】【话】【,】【这】【是】【前】【提】【,】【毋】【庸】【置】【疑】【。】【至】【于】【讲】【的】【话】【是】【“】【正】【确】【”】【,】【还】【是】【“】【错】【误】【”】【,】【这】【是】【需】【要】【认】【真】【分】【析】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【题】【目】【是】【“】【为】【自】【己】【竖】【起】【大】【拇】【指】【”】【,】【这】【是】【涉】【及】【人】【的】【自】【我】【评】【价】【的】【话】【题】【。】【这】【个】【话】【题】【具】【有】【极】【强】【的】【主】【观】【性】【,】【人】【物】【性】【格】【有】【异】【,】【观】【察】【角】【度】【不】【同】【,】【自】【我】【评】【价】【自】【然】【呈】【现】【多】【样】【性】【。】【比】【如】【,】【你】【可】【以】【“】【为】【自】【己】【竖】【起】【大】【拇】【指】【”】【,】【也】【可】【以】【“】【为】【自】【己】【敲】【警】【钟】【”】【,】【思】【维】【原】【是】【多】【向】【的】【。】【而】【本】【题】【只】【指】【定】【一】【种】【思】【维】【趋】【向】【,】【不】【符】【合】【自】【我】【评】【价】【的】【多】【样】【性】【的】【实】【际】【。】【这】【是】【命】【题】【本】【身】【的】【局】【限】【。】【该】【生】【从】【自】【我】【出】【发】【,】【选】【择】【自】【省】【的】【角】【度】【,】【坦】【言】【自】【己】【“】【懦】【弱】【、】【胆】【小】【、】【马】【虎】【,】【什】【么】【事】【也】【做】【不】【了】【”】【,】【 】【“】【碌】【碌】【无】【为】【”】【。】【这】【是】【他】【的】【选】【择】【,】【他】【的】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【据】【实】【而】【言】【,】【“】【为】【自】【己】【竖】【起】【大】【拇】【指】【”】【,】【“】【我】【不】【能】【”】【。】【恰】【恰】【是】【对】【题】【而】【作】【,】【有】【感】【而】【发】【,】【何】【错】【之】【有】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【有】【人】【会】【说】【,】【文】【章】【的】【失】【误】【在】【于】【“】【思】【想】【消】【极】【”】【。】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【“】【思】【想】【消】【极】【”】【吗】【?】【也】【不】【能】【这】【样】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【首】【先】【,】【作】【者】【的】【思】【考】【态】【度】【是】【积】【极】【的】【。】【他】【说】【:】【“】【我】【总】【喜】【欢】【安】【静】【下】【来】【,】【或】【坐】【或】【站】【,】【思】【绪】【开】【始】【萌】【发】【。】【”】【他】【在】【思】【考】【之】【后】【认】【识】【到】【:】【“】【置】【身】【世】【外】【,】【而】【去】【观】【察】【世】【事】【,】【往】【往】【要】【比】【站】【在】【世】【事】【中】【看】【世】【事】【要】【好】【。】【”】【一】【个】【中】【学】【生】【能】【静】【下】【心】【来】【思】【考】【“】【世】【事】【”】【,】【这】【是】【值】【得】【称】【许】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【说】【思】【考】【的】【结】【果】【。】【该】【生】【在】【大】【是】【大】【非】【面】【前】【,】【旗】【帜】【还】【是】【鲜】【明】【的】【,】【恐】【怖】【主】【义】【,】【抢】【劫】【行】【为】【,】【作】【者】【不】【屑】【为】【伍】【。】【至】【于】【自】【身】【弱】【点】【,】【他】【不】【讳】【言】【(】【“】【懦】【弱】【、】【胆】【小】【”】【云】【云】【)】【。】【诚】【然】【,】【他】【表】【述】【的】【观】【点】【有】【的】【偏】【激】【,】【有】【的】【片】【面】【,】【如】【:】【“】【我】【的】【处】【世】【法】【则】【:】【按】【照】【他】【人】【说】【的】【做】【。】【”】【“】【碌】【碌】【无】【为】【,】【这】【不】【是】【什】【么】【坏】【事】【。】【”】【“】【我】【宁】【愿】【背】【个】【龟】【壳】【缩】【起】【脖】【子】【,】【沉】【浮】【于】【汪】【洋】【之】【中】【。】【”】【读】【者】【不】【能】【仅】【看】【字】【面】【意】【义】【,】【而】【要】【深】【入】【了】【解】【它】【的】【实】【际】【意】【义】【。】【比】【如】【,】【作】【者】【把】【“】【碌】【碌】【无】【为】【”】【等】【同】【于】【“】【中】【庸】【之】【道】【”】【,】【这】【是】【用】【词】【之】【误】【。】【“】【中】【庸】【之】【道】【”】【,】【乃】【不】【偏】【不】【倚】【,】【无】【过】【无】【不】【及】【之】【谓】【也】【,】【这】【其】【实】【是】【一】【种】【精】【神】【境】【界】【,】【只】【是】【作】【者】【一】【知】【半】【解】【,】【所】【以】【才】【有】【“】【碌】【碌】【无】【为】【,】【这】【不】【是】【什】【么】【坏】【事】【”】【的】【表】【述】【。】【作】【者】【想】【表】【达】【的】【是】【“】【中】【庸】【之】【道】【”】【,】【用】【的】【却】【是】【“】【碌】【碌】【无】【为】【”】【。】【这】【是】【知】【识】【缺】【欠】【引】【起】【文】【章】【用】【词】【张】【冠】【李】【戴】【之】【误】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【说】【思】【想】【方】【法】【。】【作】【者】【对】【作】【文】【题】【目】【的】【思】【维】【局】【限】【性】【敢】【于】【说】【“】【不】【”】【,】【“】【我】【不】【能】【”】【,】【言】【之】【有】【据】【,】【勇】【气】【可】【嘉】【。】【但】【同】【时】【行】【文】【中】【又】【多】【处】【暴】【露】【矛】【盾】【之】【处】【。】【如】【一】【会】【儿】【说】【“】【我】【身】【上】【确】【确】【实】【实】【找】【不】【到】【任】【何】【一】【处】【闪】【光】【点】【”】【,】【一】【会】【儿】【又】【说】【“】【我】【唯】【一】【能】【夸】【赞】【的】【,】【大】【概】【是】【我】【碌】【碌】【无】【为】【,】【奉】【行】【中】【庸】【之】【道】【”】【,】【又】【说】【:】【“】【我】【可】【以】【为】【任】【何】【人】【竖】【一】【下】【大】【拇】【指】【。】【”】【这】【些】【表】【述】【都】【表】【明】【作】【者】【思】【维】【的】【不】【严】【密】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【毋】【庸】【讳】【言】【,】【该】【文】【作】【者】【知】【识】【的】【欠】【缺】【,】【思】【想】【方】【法】【的】【偏】【颇】【,】【表】【述】【观】【点】【的】【失】【准】【,】【这】【些】【都】【是】【应】【予】【指】【出】【的】【。】【但】【是】【作】【者】【不】【愿】【虚】【假】【陈】【言】【,】【敢】【于】【说】【“】【不】【”】【的】【独】【立】【思】【考】【精】【神】【,】【不】【断】【自】【省】【,】【努】【力】【表】【述】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【的】【积】【极】【作】【为】【不】【是】【应】【该】【鼓】【励】【的】【吗】【?】【对】【于】【成】【长】【中】【的】【中】【学】【生】【来】【说】【,】【思】【考】【的】【过】【程】【就】【是】【宝】【贵】【的】【积】【累】【,】【思】【考】【的】【结】【论】【他】【们】【会】【不】【断】【修】【正】【。】【循】【循】【善】【诱】【,】【给】【他】【们】【多】【一】【点】【自】【由】【发】【展】【的】【空】【间】【,】【是】【成】【长】【的】【需】【要】【,】【也】【是】【教】【育】【的】【艺】【术】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【以】【,】【我】【不】【赞】【成】【用】【“】【思】【想】【消】【极】【”】【之】【类】【带】【否】【定】【性】【的】【词】【语】【评】【价】【学】【生】【作】【文】【。】【青】【少】【年】【的】【思】【维】【最】【为】【活】【跃】【,】【这】【在】【他】【们】【的】【作】【文】【中】【每】【每】【有】【精】【彩】【的】【表】【现】【。】【正】【因】【为】【他】【们】【处】【在】【成】【长】【中】【,】【积】【极】【性】【和】【不】【成】【熟】【性】【往】【往】【杂】【糅】【在】【一】【起】【。】【我】【们】【千】【万】【要】【注】【意】【不】【能】【只】【看】【到】【他】【们】【的】【不】【成】【熟】【性】【而】【忽】【视】【他】【们】【思】【维】【的】【灵】【性】【。】【不】【敢】【思】【考】【、】【不】【会】【思】【考】【的】【一】【代】【是】【令】【人】【忧】【虑】【的】【。】【愿】【有】【更】【多】【的】【闪】【现】【思】【维】【灵】【光】【的】【中】【学】【生】【作】【文】【问】【世】【。】【我】【以】【这】【篇】【争】【议】【作】【文】【为】【例】【,】【正】【是】【想】【表】【明】【这】【样】【的】【观】【点】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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